Phrases ot the world
by mykoleary

Comment:
Need to find more uniform lighting. Not sure this meets the challenge, since you just took a picture of someone else's art.

Different bodies
by Prime_Time

Comment:
I can't read the text, which kind of defeats the purpose of the challenge. Try focusing more on the text and maybe less compression, your panoramic crop may have hurt your quality.

WARNING WORDS
by JACKIE BIRD

Comment:
Ok, but how is this *your* art? Work on capturing interest using your camera, not just taking pictures of things. I could go to wherever this is and see the exact same sign, so why do I need your picture of it? Use creativity and composition, and I'm sure you'll score higher next time.

You Should Be Here
by cinamnshortcake

Comment:
A nice idea, but your lighting is too low, and the camera was unable to capture the detail and sharpness necessary for the image. Try more ambient light with the same exposure length, or lengthen the exposure some but shade the visible ligt sources so you don't get spots of bright white. I might suggest cropping the nightstand out as well, it's a little out of place.

40 percent off sale
by crinklewrinkle

Comment:
I don't understand why this has anything to do with the challenge. It's a picture of a sign on the ground. Am I missing something? There is not alot of contrast in the image, making it look very flat, and I just don't see how the sign adds anything to the picture.

to tell a story as another has related it
by nordic

Comment:
Check your screen settings. This looks really terrible on my mac, but ok on my PC. Interesting rainbow effect, but not sure it meets the challenge. How are the words vital to the photo?

Buisness in the front, party in the back
by DefyTime

Comment:
Clever and thoughtful humor. Is this a model or a candid? I like the play on words.

Words
by yuki

Comment:
Very cute, might adjust your WB a bit. Picture looks very brownish. A bit sharper focus would help too, but I like the image alot and your idea is very fun and creative.

It's On the Tip of My Tongue...
by seanami

Comment:
This is a nice image, but it got washed out along the left side of the face. A bit darker and higher contrast would bring this picture to where it could be.

Surprise Proposal
by tyt2000

Comment:
Cute idea, nicely done pic, too bad so many people did the fortune cookie. I think the proposal sets you apart (and it made a great hint for my boyfriend for romantic ideas in the future!). A little blur along the top right edge of the cookie, maybe a DOF issue.