Shadow's shadow
by paha_l

Comment by rgordon:
Very creative -- I like it. Introducing some colour into the image, with lighting perhaps, might have been an idea. (7)

Shadow's shadow
by paha_l

Comment by Elemmennope:
Very creative idea!

Shadow's shadow
by paha_l

Comment by juliaperson:
A wonderful concept, but i think the composition of the final photo could have been a bit better. 7.

Shadow's shadow
by paha_l

Comment by Mona:
Very nice.

Shadow's shadow
by paha_l

Comment by phpkid:
Interesting one!

Wants, as they
by paha_l

Comment by chasmo:
Weak theme

Wants, as they
by paha_l

Comment by Go-KL:
Is this a picture of an advertising hoarding - if not what are the people in the bottom? A bit of a mess visually.

Leading troop of clones
by paha_l

Comment by paha_l:
Tnahks CC
comp
It is best figure for attak, it's call pig. it was used else on chudski lake, when we have soaked crusaders.
focus
i has hi f, wich allows my camera. only combunation of 2 photo will save me
Challenge
attaking clones for me is extra :-)
overall
you like traces from jet engines on the land in the manner of the light heel?
once again for comment thank you

Message edited by author 2004-07-13 07:56:53.

Leading troop of clones
by paha_l

Comment by hughletheren:
Hello Pavel from the Critique Club,

Composition
There is no single point of interest - the six water drops are the main theme and they seem to be randomly placed. The wood grain background running at a diagonal is probably the best choice. Somehow the balance is not quite right for me - maybe if the drops were placed in a defined pattern,(circle, square, diamond?) it would make more sense.

Focus
You have used a fairly shallow depth of field, which is good for drawing attention to a particular item or area but there does not seem to be a reason for it. Maybe a deeper depth of field (smaller aperture=higher f number), bringing all the drops into focus might improve the image.

Exposure
The expoure looks just about right, any more and the highlights which are already blown out would become intrusive, any less and the image would be too dark.

Challenge
Does it fit the challenge? Maybe in the context of capturing a macro of water drops, which is unusual but maybe not quite extraodinary.

Overall
Sorry but the image doesn't seem to have any purpose. If your intention was an abstract, then perhaps it needs more interest. If your intention was to stretch your photography - great! Keep shooting.

Hugh
Any comments or reactions, feel free to contact me.

Wants, as they
by paha_l

Comment by Outdoorgrrl:
She needs fill flash. Too dark to stand in equal stead or to stand out from the background. Creative idea though.