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| 12/03/2004 05:26:04 PM |
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| 12/03/2004 03:25:43 PM |
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| 12/03/2004 01:18:38 PM |
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| 12/03/2004 09:07:59 AM |
Frozen Leafby BikeRacerComment by thatcloudthere: Definitely a lot of potential...I think I would try and stretch out the histogram to make the blacks more black.
And yes, the blobs need to go away and I would go for a much more dramatic crop...be bold...
I'd like to see this if you again if you tweak it a bit. |
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| 12/03/2004 07:28:51 AM |
Six Vasesby BikeRacerComment by Skip: while i like the colors and general composition, in images as this, you would want the reflections to lend to the image, not take away from it. here, the reflections, especially of the light source, are not adding to the image. [if you want to see a great example of a reflection adding to an image, check out coley's everyday objects entry...] |
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| 12/03/2004 07:24:42 AM |
Frozen Leafby BikeRacerComment by Skip: i agree that this has potential. play with the crops, and definitely clone out the large white stuff. very interesting image. Message edited by author 2004-12-03 07:25:01. |
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| 12/03/2004 05:04:36 AM |
Six Vasesby BikeRacerComment by Arcanist: as with the lamp, try the unsharp mask trick, may prove to effect the contrast and focus/haze at the same time if you are looking for that type of a change in this image. |
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| 12/03/2004 05:00:22 AM |
Lamp Detailby BikeRacerComment by Arcanist: I love the framing of this patterned image, but there is a lot of noise in the lower section and in the Black of the lamp itself (unless that is actually dust - if so, bring a feather duster with you on the reshoot). Beyond a doubt, the noise in the wall/ceiling has to go, but the lamp noise could stay...
In an artsy way, I kinda like the noise. The depth of field seems just right and the focus on the teardrop is exactly where it needs to be. On my work monitor (not calibrated, but fairly decent) I see no blow outs or overshadowing a perfect exposure on the final print.
see what happens with an unsharp mask at 20-40%, 50 radius and 0 levels... Message edited by author 2004-12-03 05:01:06. |
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| 12/03/2004 03:48:28 AM |
300 CPW 3by BikeRacerComment by samtrundle: The silhouette effect here works well and that sky is really cool, maybe a slightly different crop would improve it, but this photo has quite a bit going for it. |
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| 12/03/2004 03:41:25 AM |
Six Vasesby BikeRacerComment by samtrundle: This is definately well composed, but the focus is much too soft, bumping the contrast and saturation would definately help this image - I'd try sharpening it quite a lot too, it might be effective with a high contrast and maybe even a bit of grain.
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