Leaving for the city
by PatrolComment by BMacD:
Hi! Hereís a comment from the Critique Club.
Eyes drawn directly at the animals face, then up to the sign, over to the sky , the dark tree on the right and then back to the animal. Then the more practical question, was it running at you? Good thing you were looking up!
Found the sign, sky and trees distracting. Given your subject, tighter cropping may have helped.
No problem meeting the challenge. Animals expression is really good! I liked your title. It went with the expression.
With no post editing comments, I donít know what you were trying to achieve. A little more contrast may have improved the flatness of the picture. I found the focus soft with nothing sharp. Given your comment, you may not have had time to keep your subject in focus!
The subject and mood were stronger than the technical aspects of the picture.