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| 05/05/2004 10:05:13 AM |
Rusty Doorby pmichaudComment by BillE: lighting a bit harsh, might have looked softer early in the morning or late in the day |
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| 05/04/2004 09:18:51 PM |
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| 05/04/2004 05:31:44 PM |
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| 05/04/2004 01:34:57 AM |
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| 05/02/2004 09:58:09 AM |
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| 05/02/2004 03:52:52 AM |
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| 04/30/2004 01:48:42 PM |
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| 04/29/2004 05:18:28 PM |
Wild Blue Yonderby pmichaudComment by wewillexplore: Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi Patsy!
As this image is your highest rated yet, I find it almost amusing to try and tell you how to improve it. Instead, I'll focus on what I see and don't see.
What I see is that it looks like you used a gradiant fill from top right to bottom left. While these are nice effects and I use them as well, the black doesn't fit and the lines it creates in an image like this are distracting. You could have cleaned them up with a healing brush, though admittedly that's more work.
I also see a stunning shot with 3/4 of an inch off both the top and right margins. These areas aren't adding anything to the photo - get rid of them and make the subject larger as a portion of the image.
I don't see a pilot looking into the sun. I don't see the wing. And I don't see anything on the right side of the image to balance this composition except the streak in the upper right.
This is a wonderful image and congrats on your best yet score! Keep shooting and good luck!
Mav |
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| 04/28/2004 01:26:09 PM |
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| 04/28/2004 12:39:57 PM |
There's Always a Lightby pmichaudComment by autool: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 9
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 5
Total Averaged Rating 7 Autool
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