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| 09/07/2007 05:19:56 PM |
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| 09/06/2007 10:43:50 PM |
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| 09/06/2007 08:19:03 PM |
A man walks down a street.by SaswaaComment by McFrikki: The angle and composition are not good also the black and white processing is not appealing, this image needs more passion more pop because right now it's exactly what the title says. |
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| 09/04/2007 03:49:45 PM |
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| 09/01/2007 02:55:02 PM |
Silent Wingsby SaswaaComment by ericwoo: Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Great depth of field use. I really like the way your subject is isolated from the background. Even still, I think the bid itself needs a bit more focus.
Lighting: Again, nicely used lighting to isolate your subject.
Composition/Content: The composition is lacking. I agree with Trinity_12_12 in that the crop is far too tight on the bird's wings. Beyond that, the overall composition is too centered for my liking.
My Opinion: Not a bad score, but with better composition a a little better focus, I think your score might have pushed up near 6.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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| 09/01/2007 01:43:12 PM |
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| 08/26/2007 04:26:45 PM |
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| 08/26/2007 12:04:21 PM |
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| 08/25/2007 02:50:53 PM |
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| 08/24/2007 05:54:25 PM |
Silent Wingsby SaswaaComment by Trinity_12_12: I feel the crop is a little tight with the wings touching the edges of the frame but I like the background as it makes the bird stand out really well. The bird seems a bit over bright though as a lot of the texture of the feathers has been lost. |
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