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| 05/17/2004 03:19:18 PM |
Bangby budokanComment by admart01: Hi Sam,
Greetings from the Critique Club.
(Reading through the comments -- seems your humor was appreciated by some but in poor taste to others. Seems like this type of shot gets extra points from some balanced out by those who didn't like the symoblism).
I don't know if I can add anything brilliant to the notes below.
Your border brings out/repeats the lines in the photo and compliments the composition. Playing around with the 50/50 balance of head/hand (as some offered in their suggestions) could have the benefit of getting rid of the knot in the wood as I found it an intrusive part of the background.
Overall, I think this shot is well done. It's creative take on the theme is refreshing. Your subjects expression is spot-on and the rusty object plays an important role in the story you're telling.
Please pm me if you've got any questions on my comments,
Regards,
Theresa |
| 05/12/2004 03:54:33 AM |
Bangby budokanComment by boomer: Originally posted by Glen King: Not a bad idea. Interesting composition. If you're going to take this route, I think you might do better to try the old National Lampoon magazine cover, "if you don't buy this magazine, we'll shoot this dog!" 8 |
Wasn't that Mad Magazine? |
| 05/11/2004 01:18:47 PM |
Bangby budokanComment by Bibliophile: I would have used a larger aperture to get more of the photo in focus. The gun should have just as much weight as his eyes, imho. Excellent idea and cropping. |
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| 05/11/2004 10:55:36 AM |
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| 05/10/2004 11:11:07 PM |
Bangby budokanComment by whagerbaumer: Great model, great expression and wonderful skin tones. All I wonder about is the source of the bang itself. Beautifully composed, framed and cropped. Very imaginative. Great work.
A 9. |
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| 05/10/2004 08:29:40 PM |
Bangby budokanComment by turdave: Very interesting photograph. I had a good laugh when I clicked on this one. Keep up the interesting shots. |
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| 05/10/2004 06:20:39 PM |
Bangby budokanComment by boomer: My pick for the Blue Ribbon. Original, well done, creative, funny, well composed. |
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| 05/10/2004 10:02:14 AM |
Bangby budokanComment by autool: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 9
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 8
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 10
How well does it meet the challenge: 10
Total Averaged Rating 9.25 Dick
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| 05/10/2004 08:23:07 AM |
Bangby budokanComment by W.R.Miller: This is an interesting take on the challenge. I like it. It's nice to see some humor mixed in with the bag. It's nice to have someone break up the monotony of just rusty object (I just did a plain old rusty object myself). This is cool. Nice focus and I like the expression on the face. Good luck with the challenge!!! |
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| 05/09/2004 10:00:30 PM |
Bangby budokanComment by orussell: Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 7
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 6
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 7
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