Light on the other side
by stanm2Comment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
I think this is loely, but it is a little flat.
Very very centred .. it works ok for this shot .. but not for all ... have a search on rule of thirds .. this may help in future.
meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
This is a little flat as mentioned by the other commentors ... this could be corrected through contrast being added.
To grow its vote?:
think about how others see what you are looking at. What is interesting in the shot .. and what you think will come of it ...
This is great for your second challenge .. well done and keep it up!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.