Swinging at Twilight
by Jules1x

Comment by LoVi:
you have a solid subject
there's that pinkish golden light
I wish there was something more....or less feels like there is not enough of either one the swings are lit by something.....a flash?

I feel an emptiness - not movement or joy - is that what you are trying to show..... a conclusion - the end of a play day?

Fitzie
by Jules1x

Comment by LoVi:
Watching....wondering....

Fitzie
by Jules1x

Comment by Penny Lane:
cute

Swinging at Twilight
by Jules1x

Comment by whitewolf:
:)

Rural.
by Jules1x

Comment by grahamgator:
Nice composition.

Swinging at Twilight
by Jules1x

Comment by kiwinick:
good idea but does not gell I think to much swings perhaps along thinshot crop just under the snow perhps strengthens it

Swinging at Twilight
by Jules1x

Comment by insteps:
Wonderful idea for the challenge but I'm not so sure about your composition. I'd like to see a little sky above the horizontal beam supporting the swings. Maybe a little more space on the bottom too. Either way, a very nice take on the challenge.

Rural.
by Jules1x

Comment by Lydia:
7 from me. So interesting... love the processing.

Rural.
by Jules1x

Comment by blindjustice:
There is something crazy going on with the processing of the leaf branch area, and in the context of the shot it works very well. I also think the low flat aspect, coupled with the flame-like trees against a powdery sky, creates a very pleasing feel, a terrific softness in the midst of the trees "dancing" for the viewer's pleaure. super job.

Rural.
by Jules1x

Comment by LoVi:
between the branches like soap film I'm imagining a little train I think I can I think I can