Consider the Lily
by banmorn

Comment:
nice lighting and subject. i would recomend posing/triming the green parts that cut through the flower in lower right and upper left to make the flower stand out better on the black. 8

Simply a Vase
by Shelley

Comment:
very nice. the red and blue kickers off to the side really help this image pop. this is another one where i feel the border gives it just that little extra finishing touch. 9

Frosty with his brother the sewman
by Dim7

Comment:
cute idea, needs more dof though.

A simple rope...
by Jason

Comment:
the red light really makes this image

Vase
by JC_Homola

Comment:
i would like to see the vase? more. zoom in so that it takes up more space vertically and it should fill around half of the frame horizontally. imo

Plain Jane
by TSaylors

Comment:
Good idea but needs better lighting. I would sugest a single light (soft) from above and off to one side. also you have some strange things going on around the knees (motion??) If you don't have studio flashes try bouncing your flash unit off of the wall/ceiling this will give you a nice soft light without the long exposures. you're on the right track though, posing is beautiful.

Just a simple call away
by guizz

Comment:
the 555 really makes it look too set up. any 3 #'s would work

Just paint.
by AmiYuy

Comment:
Good idea, it needs some color though. maybe red paint instead of white. the white paint looks too hot and contrasty.

No top...teapot
by wetland

Comment:
Too many reflections, a light tent would have helped this out. Still a 7, but could have easily been an 8.

X-ray frames
by kiwiness

Comment:
pay attention to details dude. your film is tmy (tmax 400) a black and white film. love the image just a picky observance.