Brewing Storms
by sapper

Comment by PennyStreet:
like a teapot... beautifully brewed

Brewing Storms
by sapper

Comment by illini75:
Great sky

Brewing Storms
by sapper

Comment by bmartuch:
The composition is really neat. Love the sky.

Searching for the Gold Rush
by sapper

Comment by giantmike:
The setup for this seems to have competing energies. Both the machine and the guy seem like main subjects, so my eyes don't know where to look. Maybe if the guy were closer to the camera, or if the machine was "facing" him, that would allow the scene to be a bit more together.

Searching for the Gold Rush
by sapper

Comment by bvy:
Smirky and quirky. I like it.

Granville St Bridge
by sapper

Comment by spiritualspatula:
Hello from the Critique Club.
My first thoughts on your photo-
I like how the bridge crosses the scene, and the sky is a nice use of negative space to direct us towards the terminus of the bridge. Visually, I then trace my way back up the bridge towards the right of the photo, but this is inhibited a bit by the reflections in the water bottom left. At this point, I’m sorta in the nether world and the competing elements of the docks, reflections, and boats are all fighting each other for attention. I like how the buildings in the back are framed by the bridge, tucked away behind things. Exposure is good, maintaining detail throughout most of the bridge understructure. Really, all I would say is to try and declutter the scene by altering your vantage point slightly. It’s a nice photo of a bridge, otherwise.
Good job on your first challenge!

Granville St Bridge
by sapper

Comment by npasel:
This really stands out. Good job.

Granville St Bridge
by sapper

Comment by FocusPoint:
Nice night shot :) 7