Panic
by JenHall

Comment by ccjp:
Scary. The eye focuses right away on the menacing silhouette at the door, and then follows the reflected light on the floor, all the way to yourself. Scary!

dirty
by JenHall

Comment by elemess:
Man, you are gonna get a really low score on a really cool picture. The details on the window and pane are great, and there's just enough of the city visible to give this an "urban" feel. Well done.

Panic
by JenHall

Comment by dsidwell:
I'm not sure what this is about, but the darkness and that single light line through the photo sure build a nice mood.

Panic
by JenHall

Comment by ChrisW123:
It's too dark to tell what it is. All I can see is the ourline of something at the top. Is your monitor setup correctly? I'm sure mine is so...

dirty
by JenHall

Comment by soup:

i like the idea - differs from the rest
speaks urban - simple and to the point
still intriguing - and holds your eye
9

soup

Panic
by JenHall

Comment by Neuferland:
I waited to come back to this one until I got my monitor adjusted because before it was very dark and forbidding and the concept wasn't really being conveyed to me. After coming back I can see more of what you were going for and agree that this is a nightmare in the making. The only thing that could have made this shot better for me was more emphasis on the person and the window and not quite a much darkness to the left and bottom. The shaft of light coming in the bottom is a nice touch.

dirty
by JenHall

Comment by visitor:
Nice gritty picture (literally) but on challenge - not quite for me.

dirty
by JenHall

Comment by stevenayer:
This works for me -

dirty
by JenHall

Comment by Neuferland:
I think I understand where you were trying to go with this, the grittiness, dirty side of urban living? Nice concept but the picture itself really throws me off. The lines draw your eyes out to the edges but I feel if the background, the landscape itself was just slightly more defined it might have score higher with me.

Panic
by JenHall

Comment by StevePax:
Great composition and use of negative space. 7.