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Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the colours are really vivid, almost unnaturally so.

Technically this is a little different. The titled view works for these buildings. The cat is not placed precisely on a third - this lets us see more graffiti but it also makes the cat seem a bit like it's cramped against the edge. It's a shame this was basic editing as those cats eyes could have really popped with a little extra work.

Artistically this has a very strong message. The black cat against the vivid graffiti is a great contrast.

In summary this tells a strong story but I think the processing is a little too unnatural for many voters.

Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry

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Comment by ikopanas:
The cat as it is out of focus does not help the image imo.

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Comment by treimee:
Good idea but the cat needs to be either in focus or show some type of detail. The eyes being out of focus and a black blob kinda ruins the rest of the photo.