Undercover
by janaelee

Comment by mark082:
I don't really get this shot. It doesn't really fit the challenge to me. Also, the composition doesn't excite me. Perhaps if she were a bit off-center, it would pop more. Her skin is blown out a bit as well. You were obviously shooting in difficult lighting conditions. I don't know that I could remedy any of that, but that's what I see when I look at this photo. 5

Undercover
by janaelee

Comment by HarveyG:
What's she looking for? A hidden treasure? Car keys? I'm not sure I see treasure in this shot. Would have scored it better if subject was looking elsewhere and not into the lens.

Undercover
by janaelee

Comment by EstimatedEyes:
Nice B+W, good set up, interesting composition. Would have liked to see a ring or something under the car she's looking for (or maybe its there and just doesn't show up on my monitor). 7

The Spirit of Joy
by janaelee

Comment by Lydia:
I love their smiles! The image seems a bit dingy... could use some brightening and/or contrast, maybe. Also, the expression on the girl on the left is not attractive with her cutting her eyes to the corner like that. I know it's hard to control expressions, but in a photography contest, some will call this a 'snapshot' instead of a photograph for a contest. I've heard it time and again.

It's a happy photo and it makes me smile. So, points for that! :) (not voting)