Weather Invasion over Jax Beach
by jessielude

Comment by JimiRose:
Cool shot - would have been great to see more of the cloud - and you've chopped a man in half at the bottom!

Weather Invasion over Jax Beach
by jessielude

Comment by Jedusi:
amazing weather front and lighting.

Weather Invasion over Jax Beach
by jessielude

Comment by ThatChickOverThere:
Nice sky!!! We've had some great clouds here in St. Pete lately too!

Wet Slumber
by jessielude

Comment by JulietNN:
HI from the C Club

Powerful POV here. The grain is very dominant in this, I think just a tiny bit less would have given a little impact. Also your cropping could be more dramatic in this shot. Crop out the shower curtain and the soap dish, and BAM you are full force on with your 'body'

I do not think there is anything else in post processing that you can do, as this seems perfect for this shot

Wet Slumber
by jessielude

Comment by liberty:
the noise fits the subject, I would have liked to see more contrast....6

Wet Slumber
by jessielude

Comment by Jason_Cross:
I think the composition of this is just a little off. I am not sure what I would have done to fix it.

Where You Want to Be
by jessielude

Comment by ThatChickOverThere:
nice!

Where You Want to Be
by jessielude

Comment by Tammster:
I love the concept of the picture. However, I'm not as thrilled with the lighting in the picture. A little too shadowy.

Where You Want to Be
by jessielude

Comment by danculwell:
Love the idea. I would have loved more light on the feet and a little more color in the sky.

Gazing Grasshopper
by jessielude

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
When shooting anything as small as these items are, it's a lot better if you can use a monopod to hold the camera steady. I guess that to get this, you had to go with what you had in hand. Another trick that I use often is to set the self timer to 2 seconds, which helps a lot with camera shake when I push the shutter button.
Composition could be improved by trimming off the bottom and left third, and ending up with the subjects in a diagonal , corner to corner. There is a lot of dark space, even though it has texture, in the left and lower areas that is not really adding punch to the effect of the shot.
I guess that what I am trying to say is to try to zoom or move in closer to the primary subjects if you can, when you shoot.
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