National Museum, 1879
by kostia

Comment by drydoc:
Slightly more deeper sky. Very Nice shot

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by chudzta:
This one is screaming desolation. Escape. I love it.

National Museum, 1879
by kostia

Comment by spiller:
This is one of my favorites. Composition very nice. Good luck.

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by gerdagrice:
I like this composition a lot. The empty pavement and the blown about bits of paper and the dead leaves do certainly coinvey a feeling of desolation to me. Nice interpreation of the challenge.

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by Fayech:
i think missing the last bus would be more desolate. :o)
this image would be more impactful if maybe their was someone there waiting. just a hint of their feet or something.

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by imagesloyola:
you know what...i love the simplicity of this image...this is the common thing, every body saw in the street and you captured it very nicely, got a very good eye...the composition is just right. rating...9

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by Kavey:
My feeling about this image is that you may have concentrated so hard on showing a desolate scene that you have overlooked the importance of presenting an image that works in it's own right. Although the abandoned bus ticket is the focal point and presumably the subject the thing that stands out most to me is the unattractive metal gate/ shelter/ signpost at the left of the frame. I feel it makes the composition weak. I wonder if it might be stronger if the image contains the same bus ticket (or other litter) on it's own on the paving? The texture, dirt and strong lines of the paving have some interest and might give more focus to the ticket?
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Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by amsmyth:
for me litter doesn't make for desolate and I need your title to understand your intent, rather than getting it from the photo

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by ttreit:
Personally this communicates desolation to me well. Creative shot. I think I'd like to see less trash....just leaves and the bus schedule. The yellow and white pieces of paper I find detract from the image.

Catching the last bus
by kostia

Comment by pottersclay75:
good shot. needs something else in it though to serve as a focal point