|05/07/2004 09:49:01 PM|
by RichT8496Comment by wewillexplore:
Greetings from the Critique Club!
This shot does not give me a sense of 'where you live.' While I don't think it falls outside of the challenge brief, it's not nailing me over the head with it either. You live on the 11th floor? I like the perspective in this shot, but the flare detracts from the lines/parallels and overall composition. I see lines, edges and then circles disrupting the flow.
I like that this is in b/w. color would be too hard on the eyes looking this way.
Nice finish! Happy shooting!
|05/01/2004 10:28:12 PM|
|04/30/2004 06:33:30 PM|
by RichT8496Comment by lecalan:
Really neat view and composition!! Love how the sun is giving off those light rings. Great in B/W. Would be nice if buildings were parallel. I don't feel like it really tells me where you live, though. Overall: 8
|04/29/2004 11:15:31 AM|
|04/29/2004 10:48:13 AM|
by RichT8496Comment by f-32:
Good composition, well exposed, well executed. Serrendipitous balance of inside lights on righ/top building contrasted with random vertical panels on left/lower building catching the light differently than the remainder. And the moire pattern on the left adds to it. My favorite so far! 9
|04/27/2004 10:56:50 AM|
|04/27/2004 09:53:51 AM|
|04/27/2004 12:02:00 AM|
|04/26/2004 09:32:15 PM|
by RichT8496Comment by photom:
Nice black and white - great composition. The circular patterns of the lens flare actually enhance the image with some different shapes.
|04/26/2004 07:12:42 PM|
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