11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by wewillexplore:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

This shot does not give me a sense of 'where you live.' While I don't think it falls outside of the challenge brief, it's not nailing me over the head with it either. You live on the 11th floor? I like the perspective in this shot, but the flare detracts from the lines/parallels and overall composition. I see lines, edges and then circles disrupting the flow.

I like that this is in b/w. color would be too hard on the eyes looking this way.

Nice finish! Happy shooting!

Mav

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by antimethod:
manmade beauty - all around

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by lecalan:
Really neat view and composition!! Love how the sun is giving off those light rings. Great in B/W. Would be nice if buildings were parallel. I don't feel like it really tells me where you live, though. Overall: 8

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by Ivar:
Interesting point of view, good choice to have it in b&w.

Thumbs up!

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by f-32:
Good composition, well exposed, well executed. Serrendipitous balance of inside lights on righ/top building contrasted with random vertical panels on left/lower building catching the light differently than the remainder. And the moire pattern on the left adds to it. My favorite so far! 9

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by dirtkahuna:
Very dramatic!

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by Jeileen:
Definitely creative...

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by artvet:
I like it! (9)

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by photom:
Nice black and white - great composition. The circular patterns of the lens flare actually enhance the image with some different shapes.

11th Floor
by RichT8496

Comment by tomzinho:
very neat photo - i reached for my sunglasses.