WaterLandAir 1626
by geminiwb

Comment by jmritz:
This is so so good.

The Temple.jpg
by geminiwb

Comment by MikeO:
Love this - where was this taken?

thanks

mike

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by muckpond:
Greetings from the Critique Club --

This is a great motion capture, very sweet and nice to see.

Here are a couple of suggestions that could make this photo better:

Better lighting. I'm guessing you used the flash for this, which is why you could have such a high shutter speed. Unfortunately, it washed out the color of the cats and makes them look overexposed. You can try and adjust the levels or contrast to help counteract this somewhat...

Spot Focus: The focus is best at the bottom of the frame, when it should be on the face or tongue of the top cat.

Framing: I know this was a fill-the-frame challenge, but I think the tight cropping here might have hurt you a bit. I say this because the two cats are so similiarly-colored that it's difficult to discern between the two.

Congrats on a nice image.

Rob

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by kyrielle:
Very cute and amusing. The brightest white patches are just a little too bright, losing detail - other than that, this is gorgeous.

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by frisca:
a bit over exposed on the cat's face and ear of the second cat, but I love the mix of the two animals where they almost blend together, and that tongue is cute. :)

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by pinback:
Good subject, harsh lighting.

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by PaulMdx:
Composition: Nice use of ROTs. My eye was drawn to the black part at the bottom though - I would have tried to crop this out, if possible.
Technical: The focal point for me is the cat's eyes/nose, which aren't the most in focus. I think this would improve the image quite a lot. (I realise it's a pain to work with animals!)
Meets challenge: Yes
Overall impression: Nice idea, but lacking a little technically.

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100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by dacrazyrn:
There is good focus on the one cat at the bottoms ear, then seems to get softer from there. the whites are a bit blownout. L like the overall color of them both filling the screen

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by marbo:
ahhh nice pussy. Could maybe do with a touch more contrast.

100% Pure Feline
by geminiwb

Comment by rickhd13:
would have been better if both eyes had been visible