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All Roads.....
02/16/2005 01:28:22 AM
All Roads.....
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Comment by EarlySaturdayMorning:
look so busy!! great composition!
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All Roads.....
02/16/2005 01:04:42 AM
All Roads.....
by geminiwb

Comment by C_Steve_G:
I like this view. Did you try a little more contrast?
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WaterLandAir 1626
02/14/2005 06:34:04 PM
WaterLandAir 1626
by geminiwb

Comment by geminiwb:
Originally posted by Rasai:

Hello Wesley,
I was wondering if this photo was taken at or near the Point Reyes light house looking south east towards Mt Tam. (on the right in the background?) It a great shot!


Yes, this is Drake's beach, on the Southern part of the point.
Got Grace??
12/29/2004 07:35:45 PM
Faces #4
11/13/2004 11:44:35 AM
Faces #4
by geminiwb

Comment by fstopopen:
Greetings from the critique club.

This is a good Low-key shot. I definitely think that the black and white was the way to go on this one. I am able to get a sense of who the man is through this picture which makes it a successful portraiture.

Composition:
The choice of this super tight composition is a bold one. It is certainly thinking outside the box a little and that is good. My eye is drawn, however to the lower right corner where there is something white, I presume a wall. This is the brightest portion of the image and it is very distracting to me. I like that his face is at a slight tilt, making a straight-on head shot into something a little more interesting.

Lighting:
This technique is a wonderful way to derive passion from your subject, and this photo demonstrates the technique fairly well. I would suggest two things. The first is that the light could be a little softer. The subject’s cheek has some… “texture” that perhaps could have been dampened by a slightly softer light source. You could use a soft box, or if you aren’t using professional lights, you can just go to your local photo store and get a diffuser gel to affix in front of your light source. This will also make the light spill over onto the face in a more dramatic way. The second suggestion is to work just a little more on the placing of the light. Your effect is good, but I am a little distracted by the reflection of the light in the subject’s left eye. The eye itself is a little too dark for my taste, and that reflection just accentuates that. I usually end up raising my light source higher to eliminate those things, but you can move it any direction you want to remove the reflection. More than anything, just be aware of the reflections in your photo, especially in the eyes.

Post Processing:
Nicely done. The post processing in this photo (other than the desat) is not obvious, and that is what I try for in most pictures. You have done a tasteful job of enhancing your image, but not drawing attention to the enhancements. Short of using a diffused light source, you might have done a slight blur on the face itself as outlined in this tutorial.

Nice picture. Good emotion. And that is what counts.
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Faces #4
11/06/2004 08:14:27 AM
Faces #4
by geminiwb

Comment by Philos:
I would have liked to see something from the dark part of his face
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Faces #4
11/01/2004 04:49:02 PM
Faces #4
by geminiwb

Comment by arngrimur:
I like this shot and the anonymous open title. Good work.
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Alone.jpg
03/25/2004 11:57:25 PM
Alone.jpg
by geminiwb

Comment by Koriyama:
The b&w really brings home the starkness of a life on the streets. An effective shot.
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Alone.jpg
03/25/2004 11:26:22 PM
Alone.jpg
by geminiwb

Comment by TooCool:
This is a very nice shot with your new camera! Love the DOF and your B/W treatment is a real treat to the eyes! Good shooting!
TC
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Gull.jpg
03/25/2004 08:44:44 PM
Gull.jpg
by geminiwb

Comment by Sonifo:
Great shot. maybe a bit to cropped unless there was objects distracting the the eye from the bird.
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