Copy of a stapler
by Alexys

Comment by Annida:
Hello from the Critique Club!

Hi a_berenguer, I hope I find you in good health :)

This is an interesting shot, and definitely fits into the challenge well. I like the green tinge, personally.

I think you may have tried to over sharpen the image, because it seems like the metal is a bit hard to look at. I think I would suggest trying this same picture with a different aperture, something more in the middle range to get better light in.

There is a bit of distraction with the way you placed the picture, and the composition. I think had you stood a bit more to the left, and cut out the top left corner of the copier, it would have worked more harmoniously.

All in all, I think the idea was there, but the execution could have been a tiny bit better :)
Good luck in future challenges,
Annida

Me... Yo.... Je
by Alexys

Comment by ozdick:
A nice shot, but there's nothing that makes this photo stand out from the others. Would have been nice to see the background a bit more level as well

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Comment by wewillexplore:
Simple, straightforward, good.

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Comment by ChrisW123:
Try to offset the shot to make it more interesting..... ie. Crop it, leaving nothing on the right side for example.

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by Alexys

Comment by Gracious:
Nice casual portrait.

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Comment by Koriyama:
sorry but this is boring

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Comment by rmahan:
Good clear photo but too bright in my opinion.

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Comment by albright1:
Awesome colors, and great sun-squeezed expression.

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Comment by bcncrazy:
qué guapo!!!!, que malas son las fotos , no?, tq

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by Alexys

Comment by hughletheren:
You so close to the cvamera that your arms and legs are large compared to your body - maybe it was intentional, if not, move further away but keep the same composition with zoom. I like the moody expression.