Moonshot
by hughletheren

Comment by mcmurma:
Its a nice moon, but it does appear a little fuzzy.

Office paraphernalia or is it ....?
by hughletheren

Comment by HBunch:
*Critique Club*
Very creative. Definately original and even humorous.
The one thing that I notice here that I think could be improved upon is the lighting. Look at especially the green writing utencils, and the orange one to the left. They are quite too bright, and have some light glare on them. I wonder if putting something between your subjects and your light source could have cut down on this glare.
The focus seems good. I think that the detail shown is really nice especially in the bubbles in the coffee.
The angle and framing/cropping are perfect in my opinion. I really like how it goes from bottom left to upper right. The large coffee in the middle also makes for something nice to look at.
The shadows from the items are a bit distracting, and the background color doesn't really appeal to me. It does make sense in an office setting though. Brown desk. While I do think it fits the theme, still doesn't make it too appealing.
Overall really neat.
~Heather~

Inside & Out
by hughletheren

Comment by prhorton:
Love this shot, great concept and I can tell you whats wrong, you've only got half a brain, can't complain about composition or color tones. Final diagnosis is you will live for a long time.

MiB III (The Sequel - Man & Woman in Black)
by hughletheren

Comment by Sonifo:
The focus seems a bit off on the man. Not sure why. I like your idea but maybe put the lighting more towards the side to create more shadows. Good luck.

Inside & Out
by hughletheren

Comment by Isabelle:
creative composition! good luck

Moonshot
by hughletheren

Comment by Shadow Eagle:
beautifil shot of moon 6

Moonshot
by hughletheren

Comment by marbo:
I know moon shots are differcult but this could be sharper. I guessing you didn`t use a telescope but maybe a tele converter.

Inside & Out
by hughletheren

Comment by KING:
You have made a fascinating picture. Good choice of colors BTW. (8)

MiB III (The Sequel - Man & Woman in Black)
by hughletheren

Comment by draney4:
my oh my, another perfect 10, excellent challenge submission.

Inside & Out
by hughletheren

Comment by floyd:
Super, personal work. I like your concept and it's a well taken photo. I think the only thing I would have liked to see is perhaps a little more contrast across your face. You've captured the form well, though. 8 - floyd