Untitled
by EddyG

Comment:
clipped the elbow a bit too close and the expression seems exhasperated with you for taking so long - but the lighting is good, background and chair work well and compliment her colours - needs maybe a bit more light in to the eye sockets

Send in the Clowns
by Prime_Time

Comment:
almost too dark to see

My Love...
by toddhead

Comment:
Don't think the black/green glove works well with the black background - not enough contrast so it looks like a gap or her shoulder has been cut off and is floating in space S niy more DoF to keep the hair all in focus, or less DoF to blow it out more would work better I think too - feels stuck somewhere between those extremes

Contemplation
by waterlilies

Comment:
good potential but really looks underexposed by about a stop or so

Sheridan
by gajmaj

Comment:
great high key style portrait - the eyes look unnaturally brown/ orange though

Carmela Viola
by johnm

Comment:
love it - plenty of personality, great lighting - cool shot.

Her eyes
by Miinerva

Comment:
Your processing has almost removed all the detail from her eyes - giving big black pools - could be what you are going for - but the title seems to contradict that

Ponderous
by dagills22191

Comment:
the leading arm towards the camera makes it look much heavier than it probably is. Not convinced that the hair position helps her either - particularly as it dissappears in to the background and appears on the table too - looks like some of it has almost been cut off and ended up lying on the table - some better arrangement might have been more flattering

Sam
by rhipster

Comment:
Very even, soft lighting - over all feel is a touch flat/ lacking in contrast though. Arm placement feels a little uncomfortable, crossing/ cutting the right arm in particular

Kelly
by Tallbloke

Comment:
really needs some more light to balance out your main source - the shadows on the cheek and eye sockets and under the hair could do with some balancing