Over Easy
by Dr.Confuser

Comment:
Hello from the critique club!

I think you have a wonderful image here! I've seen a lot of pictures of jets, especially the Blue Angels. In your picture, all four jets fit fairly well into the frame, and the upside down jets are clear. I think a closer crop would have been nicer. You also run into a little bit of a merger with the jets on the left, but it doesn't really hurt the image too much. The colors are all very nice as well.

I think your two weak areas are that merger, and the focus. Although the focus is amazing for that kind of shot, it is still a little off, and I can't ignore it. It seems a little rough, and if it was smoother, it would be more appealing.

Really great job overall!!

--James B. Hale

Apple
by Rompy

Comment:
Nice colors, good angle. Well done.

Highway One
by BHuseman

Comment:
B&W was a nice choice. Great symmetry.

Abandoned
by LittleFoot

Comment:
It's very grey and empty. That might have been your intention, but I think it just leaves the picture without interest in it.

Keep
by taterbug

Comment:
I love the negative space up top. Contrast is really nice. I think it lacks a strong interest, whether that be texture, a subject, or shapes.

City Lights
by M.O.C.

Comment:
Nice capture, especially the clouds! I don't know how "urban" this is, but I like it nonetheless.

Tilted View
by Jari

Comment:
I think this would have benefitted from a tighter crop. But it's a very nice, sharp image. Great contrast too!

On The Courts
by Angadeon

Comment:
The focus is a little off and the colors are a bit dull. Everything sort of runs together if you know what I mean.

Entering the Urban Underworld
by Pelle

Comment:
Nice composition, good contrast. Those white lines work really well. The blurriness throws it off a little.

Light Waves
by parma182

Comment:
Fun technique, but I don't think it really works well here.