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An Afternoon Swim
An Afternoon Swim
GinaRothfels


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2011-10 (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: challenges 2011
Camera: Canon EOS-7D
Lens: Sigma 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 DC OS for Canon
Location: Gauteng, South Africa
Date: Oct 22, 2011
Aperture: F6.3
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/320 sec
Galleries: Nature, Birds
Date Uploaded: Oct 31, 2011

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Statistics
Place: 311 out of 311
Avg (all users): 4.2029
Avg (commenters): 4.5000
Avg (participants): 4.1553
Avg (non-participants): 4.3429
Views since voting: 797
Views during voting: 230
Votes: 138
Comments: 7
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11/08/2011 11:27:34 PM
The voters hate ducks, except the rubber ones.
That's a bummer about getting the brown. The good part is that it can only go up from here.
Hugs for ya.
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11/08/2011 09:37:00 AM

For me, it's everything Peter said, plus the fact that years ago a duck killed my brother.....i'll never forgive that fowl deed....
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11/08/2011 06:58:13 AM
You asked a question in the threads, and so here goes a bit of comment about your shot...

As others have stated below, there are several things that combine to prevent this from scoring well.

-The focus on the face is very soft and it appears that you attempted to sharpen it through post processing. I can see a bit of detail in the feathers in one section but the remainder of the image is a bit blotchy.
-The lighting is extremely harsh, creating very hard shadows around the eye and elsewhere.
-The centered crop gives this an extremely static feel, preventing the viewer from wanting to stop and linger and look.
-The saturation of colors and white balance appear a bit too cool adding to the rather static feel of the crop.
-The contrast is extremely strong, preventing the subtle details of the feathers to show up.
-There is no background to provide a great deal of context, where the angle of the shot is downward, thus creating a 'snapshot' feel.

Combining these components, the overall feel is that the shot was a quick snap rather than a timed and planned study of the duck.

Looking at other entries you have entered before, the lighting and composition of those that have scored well was excellent, where the light interacts in a positive way to bring the object/ person to life. In this shot, that is missing.

I hope it is helpful...

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/06/2011 09:52:46 AM
Interestingly different duck. Red area in the back looks sort of unfeathered to me, like it's a growth of some sort. Probably a result of light/saturation anomaly. Like the white vignette; compositionally I'd like him to have more space to swim into.
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11/06/2011 12:23:40 AM
Lighting is very harsh and unflattering.
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11/04/2011 09:53:56 PM
Could this be sharper?
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11/01/2011 12:11:03 AM
focus soft, personally I don't like the centred composition but the water from its beak, is a rather nice touch.
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