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Challenge: Macro Without Bugs or Flowers IV (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: 2011
Camera: Nikon D60
Lens: Nikon AF-S Nikkor 50mm f/1.4G
Date: Jul 17, 2011
Galleries: Macro
Date Uploaded: Jul 17, 2011

 I quite like this image. I found the feather on the way home from work the other day and thought of this scene for it. I had some out takes with better ripples, but the feather wasn't face-fronting enough for my tastes. I thought macro details were more important than ripples so let it be.

I expect two criticisms in comments. Not very macro-esque and over sharpened. I agree with the second, but the feather was small. Maybe an inch. So I think it's definitely a macro shot.

I expect about 5.5 or so for this. But I like this a lot.

After:
Very happy with this finish. As I said earlier, I like this image. That normally means it's below a 5.5 though, so I'm delighted that it was over 6! First image in a while where I didn't get advice before posting. So it's nice to confirm that I can get over 6 by myself :-)
That's enough danger for a while, so back to advice next challenge.

I do wish I got better ripples. Note for the future, don't use thread for holding a feather. They're so light they twist and turn really really easily. Next time I'll use a think piece of something solid so I can position the feather as I want and not have to worry about getting the timing right for the feather's rotation. Had I thought of doing that I'd've gotten much better ripples. Maybe a slice of a match stick, or a think sliver of cardboard.

It's nice when the response goes up!

Statistics
Place: 24 out of 143
Avg (all users): 6.0916
Avg (commenters): 7.5000
Avg (participants): 5.9275
Avg (non-participants): 6.2742
Views since voting: 944
Views during voting: 255
Votes: 131
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0

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 03/31/2012 07:26:16 PM
This is quite beautiful. I actually hadn't seen it before. The delicate balance is deeply poetic and could not have been captured or presented better. Sincere, lovely photo. Can you tell me who you stole it from so I can fave them?
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 07/25/2011 12:08:54 AM
Good to see this was yours. It got one of my higher votes.
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 07/25/2011 12:03:23 AM
I expected a higher finish for this. I liked the closeup of two elements coming together.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/24/2011 07:37:53 PM
Very nice.
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 07/24/2011 10:35:11 AM
Not quite a macro....
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 07/18/2011 10:18:02 AM
I really like the contrast between the smooth water and the kind of bedraggled feather. Nice shot.
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