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11/05/2004 08:02:03 PM |
Looking back at this I can see how the lens distorted her face. I didn't notice when I took the shot. Funny how experience changes everything.
Thanks Gordon for the critique. |
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12/19/2002 11:23:41 AM |
Critique Club
This is a charming picture. The lighting is excellent - very even and soft and the 'pose' seems quite natural. The smile looks genuine and you've gotten good catchlights in the eyes which bring the shot to life.
The only problem I have with this shot is that I think you need to use a longer lens/ get further away as it just feels like her features are a bit distorted by the focal length on the camera.
Not sure if you can do that with your current equipment though, but it has made her head seem ever so slightly 'off' and makes me uneasy looking at the shot. Everything else is extremely well done. |
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12/16/2002 01:08:45 AM |
I do feel like this is some of my best work yet. I am very pleased with the results.
This was taken with the lighting from my livingroom window. The original seemed to bright. The effect I was looking for was a painted effect. I toned the colors down with some sepia color.
I didn't tell her to pose in any way. She was playing with the flowers and I was just taking pictures. This is naturally her style. Grrr.... She is also going through a stage where she refuses to let me put her hair up except when she goes to dance.
Thanks everyone for the comments. |
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12/15/2002 11:20:52 PM |
| Cute kid shot. The composition is great but I wish the shot overall was a little brighter and maybe some more contrast. |
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12/15/2002 10:10:18 PM |
| Cute smile. The coloring seems a bit dull to me. Maybe that was the intention. |
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12/15/2002 02:25:36 PM |
| What lovely, delicate lighting you chose! This child has that unique look of both youthfulness and wisdom. Somehow her touseled hairstyle and this pose seem to diminish her innocence, though. |
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12/15/2002 07:59:38 AM |
Nice portrait. Cute kid. Lighting on her face looks too harsh judgin by skin color on her arms compared to her face. Otherwise, a fine job here. This is one of my next areas of study.
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12/14/2002 01:20:49 AM |
OH-H-H ! I'm gettin a toothache!! its too sweet!
I think that your pushin the cute threshold. I do like it. |
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12/13/2002 03:35:39 PM |
| What a doll. She looks so natural like that, this does not look posed at all! And I love the coloring on this, it makes it seem nostalgic or something. Was it adjusted at all? |
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12/13/2002 10:15:49 AM |
| Wonderful shot and composition. I feel that is is just a tad light in the facial area. Great model. |
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12/13/2002 12:24:45 AM |
| Technically a great achievement. The colours are lovely, heading towards a kind of sepia toned theme but set off by the flowers. The lighing is lovely and soft, and I really like the way you made her hair kind of unruly, and captured a smile that looks mostly real, not faked for the camera. It's not really my type of photo, but it looks good enough to be in a calendar :). |
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12/12/2002 11:44:59 PM |
| The colorized look is very interesting. Can't wait to hear how you did it. Neat pose, too! |
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12/12/2002 07:21:50 PM |
| Very nice portrait. Color seems a little low and the background is way to close in color to her skin. Nice flowers. 7 Swash |
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12/12/2002 06:00:13 PM |
| what a sweet heart! .the soft lighting really compliments the subject.well done. |
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12/12/2002 04:53:07 PM |
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12/12/2002 12:15:17 PM |
| This is a beautiful portrait... I love the soft colors here and the look on her face... nice job with the catch lighting in her eyes as well :) Something looks a bit odd here and i can't really put my finger on it... her head looks to be slightly out of perspective... too large for the rest of her body maybe? None-the-less, a great shot :) - setzler |
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12/12/2002 11:33:00 AM |
| Excellent example of portraiture. 7 |
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12/11/2002 10:22:30 PM |
| Beautiful portrait. Nicely done. |
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12/11/2002 09:05:23 PM |
| You should be very proud of this one. I love it. Should be in top three if ppl don't count off because it is a child photo. NICE Work |
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12/11/2002 08:53:27 PM |
| Cute shot. I like how you've cropped it. |
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12/11/2002 08:38:36 PM |
| This is a very charming portrait, obviously not camera shy! The lighting and background are perfect. My only niggle, she seems to be holding onto the flowers for dear life, maybe just loosen up the hands a little. |
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12/11/2002 12:11:46 PM |
| Very nice framing. Good details on the features on the girl and on the flowers. The only thing bothering me is that the tone of her skin seems a bit off - particularly on her hand. It almost looks as thought that part was painted rather than a photo. Overall very nice = 7 |
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12/11/2002 11:23:43 AM |
| What a beautiful portrait. Framing and composition are great - she's really got a death grip on those flowers though. The lighting is very nice as well. 8 |
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12/11/2002 11:22:31 AM |
| Very cool choice to use a square framing on this shot -- I think it really balances the composition well. The background is a little close to the skintone of the girl for me, but still an overall great shot. |
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12/11/2002 09:58:46 AM |
| A good portrait shot, and the lighting is nicely even. I personally would have cropped the righthand side of this shot more, so that the child's head isn't as central, and perhaps brightened the shot a little more, but doing so without losing the textures would be tricky. |
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12/11/2002 01:16:47 AM |
| A nice soft shot. I feel that her skin color too closely matches the background though. Perhaps a bit more saturation would help. DPz |
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12/11/2002 12:15:46 AM |
| Beautiful portrait. Beautiful soft focus and soft colors. Make a great painting or tapestry. |
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12/10/2002 09:47:42 PM |
| Nice subject. However the image looks flat, with very little tone gradation. |
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12/10/2002 07:42:06 PM |
| Amazing color! At first I thought it was colorized but this beautiful child is just blessed with these amazing green eyes. You get a 10 from me - joanns |
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12/10/2002 01:54:00 PM |
| Nice portrait, she's a cutie. :) |
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12/10/2002 09:11:59 AM |
| This is a marvelous portrait. I love the fact that she is entering the photograph from the side, instead of the standard "head-on" shot. Your model is adorable to boot :-) |
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12/10/2002 08:50:59 AM |
| It's not a comment on your skills as a photographer, this is a well taken photo. Tto me the pose is highly inappropriate for a child. This is very clearly imitative of adult fashion, even soft porn, shoots. A 20 year old posed in the same way, wearing suspenders with no shirt, with the same expression, would be considered a sexy shot. The expression is just not natural for a child, the effect is quite disconcerting. |
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12/09/2002 10:50:38 PM |
| Nice use of color. Though it looks unnatural overall. I'm not exactly sure what it is about this picture, but something feels unnatural to me. |
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12/09/2002 10:27:18 PM |
Excellent shot! I like the way the color of the flowers stands out against all that brown. Good focus.
10 -Clicker- |
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12/09/2002 08:59:59 PM |
| What a cutie. You have to hang this up on your wall. 8 Jacko |
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12/09/2002 08:20:11 PM |
| pretty...you just need to adjust the color a little. |
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12/09/2002 07:48:20 PM |
| Very nice portrait. You caught the moment nicely. |
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12/09/2002 07:24:21 PM |
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12/09/2002 05:54:32 PM |
I like eveything here.....................but the light.
I don't think little girls get any sweeter then this.! The flowers are good, but pale as is her skin, eyes and hair.
This is very good work good portrait.
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12/09/2002 03:08:32 PM |
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12/09/2002 11:18:33 AM |
| Great studio shot - lovely capture of expression - this is as good as any studio professional's work. |
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11/05/2004 08:02:03 PM |
I don't like the dull colors.
But it's a good portrait in all other aspects. Good light. |
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12/09/2002 02:20:33 AM |
| such a beautiful photo. This would look excelent as one of those black and white photos with hand color added to it. Obviously, not allowed by DPC, but something to think about outside of the challenge. I love the angle and framing/cropping. your focus and clarity are great as well. The lighting is also very nice. good soft lighting. a very pretty girl. You can tell her that she (and you) got a high score from me this week. great shot. Good luck in the challenge. |
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12/09/2002 12:54:25 AM |
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