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Challenge: Wheels II (Advanced Editing VII)
Collection: Challenges 2011
Camera: Nikon D90
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor -S DX 18-105 f3.5-5.6
Location: MoMa
Date: Jan 23, 2011
Aperture: auto
ISO: auto
Shutter: auto
Galleries: Emotive
Date Uploaded: Jan 23, 2011

"Take me There - M'amenez-y" - Francis Picabia
I wish I could have asked the girl of all the longings of her heart. She looked for a long time at the Duchamp's wheel and I left on tip toes.

Statistics
Place: 26 out of 113
Avg (all users): 5.7639
Avg (commenters): 6.9000
Avg (participants): 5.2281
Avg (non-participants): 6.1149
Views since voting: 1121
Views during voting: 355
Votes: 144
Comments: 19
Favorites: 4 (view)


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02/01/2011 05:52:10 PM
Originally posted by posthumous:

I tend to mark down for museum shots because the environment has been designed by someone else. For example, it's not a coincidence that these two wheels are next to each other.
My answer: they are not. They exist in the same room though.

(quote)Aligning the wheels would only emphasize the fact that this environment is not yours.

Quoting Gide (in my own quick translation): "Everything had been said already - but since nobody listens we always have to start anew." Of course that, to some extent, you are right but don't you prefer sometimes your own shots of an art work to the ones in an album? You fix the fleeting moment, your reaction to it, your way of looking, the temperature, the light and all the rest that can transpires in your photograph. I was interested in the visual sparks of the two wheels touching, which one cannot see unless one is arranging oneself to see it. An endless discussion.

As to your 7, I am honored. Have troubles with the voting system, marks, etc. Being an artist myself I have a problem with public approval or general agreement anyway (and am weary of it) but in this medium it is more bearable, I think. I consider myself an enthusiastic novice in photography per se, a learner with a trained eye.

Duchamp would love this photo, I'm pretty sure.

I am not sure he would have approved his wheel next to Piacabia's in the same room, unless I am missing some specific history!
02/01/2011 05:13:15 PM
The 7: I tend to mark down for museum shots because the environment has been designed by someone else. For example, it's not a coincidence that these two wheels are next to each other. Aligning the wheels would only emphasize the fact that this environment is not yours.

But capturing this woman in this environment is very special, and also resonates with Duchamp's work. For example, it had never occurred to me before that his bicycle wheel is transparent, just like his glass works are. Only with a transparent work can we see the work and the viewer at the same time, seeing the viewer through the art.

Duchamp would love this photo, I'm pretty sure.

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02/01/2011 01:07:00 PM
Originally posted by posthumous:

Originally posted by mariuca:

Yes, it was a candid photo. Thus multiple flaws.


What are these flaws of which you speak?

I suppose that if it was flawless you could have marked it more than 7. Just kidding!
I took several shots without people waiting for someone to appear and perhaps have the two wheels almost tangent. Like here: oops I don't know how to upload another picture here. I'll send it to your email.
02/01/2011 11:38:23 AM
Originally posted by mariuca:

Yes, it was a candid photo. Thus multiple flaws.


What are these flaws of which you speak?
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01/31/2011 11:08:56 PM
wonderful - love it.
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01/31/2011 04:10:34 PM
I hope she finds this image someday, and I hope she feels that it has captured something about herself that she wants to keep.
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01/31/2011 08:16:18 AM
Many thanks to all for the comments.
Yes, it was a candid photo. Thus multiple flaws. But I never use models and am very shy to photograph people although, the ones in museums are too tempting to pass. I have this fantasy that I can ask people in the subway to tell me their life stories. The only thing I do is peek at their reading. And my neck got crooked.
01/31/2011 12:25:56 AM
This was one of my favourites got an 8 from me. Well spotted.
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01/31/2011 12:21:31 AM
I gave this a 7. I would have scored it higher if I knew it was a candid. Great capture!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/30/2011 08:48:11 PM
One of the more creative compositions...
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01/30/2011 12:03:31 AM
Very nice. Bit too literal for me but that's my problem & not yours. Top ten for me. Thank you.
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01/29/2011 11:16:32 PM
Steal from the best! I love Duchamp, and your model placement is great.
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01/27/2011 03:02:05 AM
What I like most about this is that you've managed to reduce the wheel in prominence physically but maintain it conceptually and visually. I very much like the composition, the wheel and the pseudo wheel, and having the girl in the frame really sets this one apart, particularly her reserved pose. One of my favorites.
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01/26/2011 02:38:19 AM
Very Nice, simple and effective.
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01/24/2011 09:50:49 PM
I don't know how I feel about this one. It's definitely more "arty" than most of the other submissions, which is neither good nor bad. What I just cant figure out is where my eyes are supposed to rest. First they go to the girl, then to the wheel and then to the painting. I think the painting and the wheel compliment one another superbly, and would do great together as a "minimalist" duo, but in honesty I feel the girl is a distraction. Nonetheless, I gave a 7 :)
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01/24/2011 06:36:30 PM
interesting symmetry
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01/24/2011 11:46:31 AM
This is art. Gorgeous lighting. So strange and whimsical.
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01/24/2011 05:39:15 AM
Awesome photo. Such a story. Great symmetry as well, and all the rest is technically perfect, but the story nails it.
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01/24/2011 12:34:48 AM
A bicycle wheel and a pretty girl. Does it get any better than this?
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