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12/10/2002 09:28:24 AM |
Critique Club
Initial thoughts
I was surprised this ranked so low – I gave it a 7 and think it’s an attractive image.
Composition/ Content
I really like the strong lines in this image – in particular the beaded strip. I think the way It’s flanked by parallel lines from the stitching and edges of denim is great. I like the inclusion of the circle – such a different texture, colour and shape – but would prefer that it weren’t cropped as it is but more fully included in the frame.
The contrast between textures is what I really like – the denim itself, the beads and the metal offer real variety in what is such a tiny part of the pair of jeans.
I would have to agree with a comment below about DOF – In this kind of macro I’d rather see the whole frame sharp – instead of having the lower left out of focus as it is.
Camera Work - Technical
Good colour and detail capture. Exposure seems good. See above regarding DOF.
Digital Processing - Technical
I would guess very little has been done to this, it certainly doesn’t look over processed and I can’t see any compression artifacts.
Fits The Challenge
Yes.
Your Opinion On The Photo
Like it very much!
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12/08/2002 11:47:08 PM |
| It makes for a pretty interesting macro. I'm glad that you didn't oversaturate this like so many people would have. Nice composition with the angle making it a more intersting shot. |
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12/08/2002 09:08:26 PM |
| Very good macro. Very clear and detailed. I really like the button in the upper left corner and the beads flowing to the right lower corner. Great execution - details make the difference. Great job. PTL 9 |
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12/06/2002 05:19:34 PM |
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12/06/2002 08:19:05 AM |
| Great texture. It loses focus toward the bottom. This might be better if the whole image was sharp, since it's so close up. muckpond |
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12/05/2002 03:34:16 PM |
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12/02/2002 11:27:00 PM |
| Nor sure if I like the button showing... it competes with the beads. Nice use of denim! |
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12/02/2002 10:15:00 PM |
| done well just no wow factor of any kind. |
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12/02/2002 07:24:00 PM |
Nice. I like this, good photo, clean, clear, crisp. Blue denim....Cool. I guess I would of liked the full Lee button, but then that's me. Nice job. Justine
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12/02/2002 05:10:00 AM |
| Ok. What does the seed bead have to do with the denum. I am lost. |
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