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Safe & Sane Refreshment
SamT


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Challenge: Advertisement Revisited (Basic Editing I)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S7000
Location: Butte, Montana
Date: Jul 5, 2004
Aperture: F: 3.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Interior, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Jul 5, 2004

Adjusted with Auto Contrast, Levels & Cropped.

Statistics
Place: 170 out of 218
Avg (all users): 4.3675
Avg (commenters): 4.8182
Avg (participants): 4.1238
Avg (non-participants): 4.5112
Views since voting: 917
Views during voting: 350
Votes: 283
Comments: 13
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/13/2004 10:18:59 PM
Should have caught the foam just as it started to go down the glass.
07/12/2004 05:06:24 PM
just a little too much head?
07/10/2004 10:16:09 PM
You bought the only bottle of non alcoholic beer sold this year, for this picture.
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07/09/2004 09:02:04 PM
In my opinion this looks rushed because of the overflow of the foam. I think the shot would have had more appeal it you used a warm beer and a frosted beer mug and a slow poor. This way as the beer warms the glass up the beer would have a crisper look to it. Aslo a warm beer so the bottle doesn't look sweaty. Bottle alone was a good shot but the glass made you lose marks.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/09/2004 06:49:20 PM
A good idea but fails to appeal as an advertising shot. Its the table covering that lets it down. Adverts usually have a strong studio feel if shot indoors.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/09/2004 09:25:06 AM
The concept is very nice.

The image needs more lighting to offset the shadows or to send the shadows off into one direction. The background is also a little dull and could use a little sprucing up with something else that enhances the refreshment concept.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/09/2004 12:51:58 AM
Too much head. I also think this would of looked better with a different background. Maybe in a bucket of ice, or a snowy stream (I know hard to do in summer). Something that said cold and refreshing though.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/08/2004 07:03:42 PM
okay i get the safe, but sane? I feel like there is too much yellow in the picture... yellow beer, yellow label, yellow tableclothe. a solid background might enhance this picture
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/08/2004 03:59:10 PM
It would look better if there was more beer than foam in the glass, but a good idea.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/08/2004 01:41:40 PM
Good idea and shot. the background just doesnt work for me for some reason. Maybe a bit darker?
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/08/2004 12:21:38 PM
Pouring needs work :)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/07/2004 07:44:16 PM
I don't say this too often, but too much head! The shadows behind the subjects are pretty distracting along with the unfocused portion of the glass.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
07/07/2004 07:17:01 AM
What a disappointment. 10
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