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Dawn Breaks the Storm
Dawn Breaks the Storm
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2010-05 (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 10-22mm f/3.5-4.5 USM
Location: Lake Scranton, PA
Date: May 26, 2010
Aperture: 22
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1.6
Galleries: Landscape, High Dynamic Range (HDR)
Date Uploaded: May 26, 2010

Many thanks to JokersSoul, Shadowi6, and RianBotes for kindly offering feedback on this image at my request. With their help, this photo underwent a number of iterations--and improvements--before finally arriving at its present state.

This is a manual HDR combination of four exposures. I don't have Photomatix and I don't know anything about HDR support (or even if there is any) in Photoshop CS3, but I do know how to use layers. So I did.

For those who might wonder about this sort of thing, this is actually a sunset--I am almost never awake for a sunrise.

The shoreline of the lake is not flat. I wasn't sure how to handle this issue, but I decided to leave it sloping down to the right because the treeline slopes up to the right. To my eye, the result looks balanced.

PP:
- Four separate exposures into separate layers in Photoshop
- Mask out improperly exposed portions of each
- Blur the water (1.6 seconds exposure was not enough for smooth water)
- Crop and resize
- Fiddle around with Topaz Adjust layers (Topaz broke when trying to run it on the full-res version)
- Sharpen
- Clone out some minor imperfections
- Some color work (fix distracting reflection on the right)
- Bit of final dodge & burn and desaturation (trees were too green)

... it boils down pretty simply, but I probably spent an hour sitting and waiting for the right moment to hit the shutter, and then at least three or four hours editing, reediting, discussing, reediting again. I hope this is well received and that the DPC voters aren't too tired of HDR landscapes yet.

Statistics
Place: 24 out of 380
Avg (all users): 6.5075
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 6.5238
Avg (non-participants): 6.4483
Views since voting: 1275
Views during voting: 248
Votes: 134
Comments: 7
Favorites: 1 (view)


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AuthorThread
11/15/2010 04:54:19 PM
"I am almost never awake for a sunrise."

Hah, I find it hard to get up that early too ;)
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06/09/2010 12:55:55 AM
Nice finish! I still love looking at this. Now I can mark as a favorite!
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06/08/2010 02:18:10 AM
Well done! Im glad this did so well for you and this being a free study makes the score and placing one not to be scoffed at. Your efforts certainly produced fruit.
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06/08/2010 02:06:12 AM
Superb, Damon!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/04/2010 07:34:54 AM
there is a richness about the colors and the smooth water that really is engaging
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06/02/2010 03:33:54 AM
ok,,,, what a shot,,,,,,,,top score,,,,,, cool work,,,,,
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06/01/2010 08:08:57 AM
Beautiful with an almost dreamlike quality. One of the better landscapes thus far.
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