In honor of [user]K10Guy[/user] I am doing 10 comments tonight, here is yours :)
Wow. Good try. But here are some issues you have in this image.
1. Your background black cloth is plainly visible. (burn it down)
2. Your flash looks like it might set a fire. (turn it down, and was this an onboard flash?? Next time use a bit of paper as a flashbouncer, or if this is a real flash, then bounce it or something :) those hard shadows kill this)
3. What the hell is she doing? :)
4. Skintone is blotchy... (please forgive, she's very cut, probably just your camera or something.:)..)
5. Sunglasses? Really?
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Other than that though, a technically good-ish image.. Everything is in focus (up to and including the background), and your model was a fine choice.
Ok, cheers... That was too long, and now you probably hate me.. Sigh. |
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