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04/24/2010 05:14:14 AM |
| I think this is very good too. I could see this photo as part of an advertising campaign. well done. |
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04/23/2010 05:44:24 PM |
the way you can see her eyelashes is FINE!
loving the grain, the comp, the feel of this shot. best of the challenge imo! |
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04/21/2010 05:25:13 AM |
| thought you would of got a ribbon on this one, the grainy effect is not to everyones taste but is certainly mine! It gives a warmth and personality that none of the others had. Bad luck. |
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04/21/2010 03:51:50 AM |
Thank you for everyones comments, the shot was taken with a film noire theme in mind.
If i'm honest i would have liked 6+ for this photo, and interestingly this is where it started out and it was only on the last day that it dropped into the 5's... |
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04/19/2010 04:11:53 AM |
| besides being grainy{which does help in this } its a nice capture 7 |
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04/19/2010 03:27:20 AM |
| would have been an excellent shot - just a bit too grainy and the light focu on wrong area of phot |
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04/16/2010 07:19:20 PM |
| Sorting through some marginal photos in this challenge, but this is good! 9 |
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04/15/2010 04:46:51 PM |
| The angle of the model does not really showcase the lingerie nor the model. The only thing I focus is the messy bed. |
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04/15/2010 08:25:11 AM |
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04/15/2010 03:40:52 AM |
| ok,,, dont know,,,, focus is not so good,,,, sorry,,,,,,,, |
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04/14/2010 04:10:42 PM |
| I think this would have worked for the "waiting" challenge a week or 2 ago. I like the use of the lighting. |
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04/14/2010 03:34:10 PM |
| Clever use of b-movie cinematographic style. The grain is essential to the photos success. Good work. |
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04/14/2010 02:16:08 PM |
| Not sure if you were going for the grainy effect, but it doesn't work for me. |
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04/14/2010 01:51:51 PM |
| Great image. love the lead from the bottom left although it is a little heavy. Grain effect works well. |
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04/14/2010 01:28:04 PM |
| Nice lighting and great grainy treatment! Love the overall warm feel. |
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04/14/2010 12:46:21 PM |
| The light is harsh on the left side and there appears to be a lot of noise. |
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04/14/2010 11:03:48 AM |
Of the "real" lingerie shots, this is easily the best IMO. I had it seeded in my top group, and now I am bumping it to 10 so it stands clear of my other high scores, most of which are well-done parodies or abstracted images.
I think you did this very, very well and I hope you ribbon. Feel free to PM me if you wish, let me know how it's going; I am done with voting and I'm curious if you're getting dinged on grain and blown-out wall or not. |
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04/14/2010 09:02:54 AM |
| It makes me think of a French cafe movie. |
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04/14/2010 08:00:07 AM |
| Posed well, but your perspective could have been a bit better. Maybe closer to the model looking down her lengthwise. Also, the lighting is a bit harsh. |
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04/14/2010 02:32:42 AM |
The lighting in the upper left is too harsh, and the lower left is too dark with no detail on her hair. Not going to get good results in this photo using matrix or evaluative metering. Perhaps partial or center weighted metering would have been more effective if your camera supports it. Seems like you also used an ISO that was too high in order to get a faster shutter speed or it's long exposure. In either case it created a very grainy and noisy texture to everything in the photo including her skin and the linens.
Nice attempt, but I'm afraid the best I can give you is a 4. |
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