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04/12/2010 04:30:33 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Composition and Lighting: The lighting highlighting his hair is quite nice, cool backlighting. The composition seems far to centered to me. It may work for this photo, but maybe try position him on the left or right rule of thirds.
Background: to me, all the toys in the background, although suggesting childhood, seem to distract from the focal point.
Technical: The focus is nice. It seems like there is some graininess to this image that could be dealt with Neat Image or other noise removal software.
Overall: Great smile, next time try playing with the lighting and composition to create more of a wow factor.
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04/11/2010 02:41:00 AM |
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04/06/2010 04:58:13 PM |
| Seems a little orange - the counter in the background being tilted is distracting for me. I would try leveling that out and cropping a bit off the right so he is not so centered. |
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04/05/2010 01:33:18 PM |
| Nice mood, but the background is too cluttered. |
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04/05/2010 06:56:56 AM |
| showing off missing teeth? |
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