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Konador Canon EOS-500D Rebel T1i |
06/29/2004 05:35:48 AM |
| I think this would have looked very good in B&W with extra high contrast. |
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Node Nikon D300 |
06/25/2004 07:30:32 PM |
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timganier Fujifilm FinePix S7000 |
06/24/2004 09:32:21 PM |
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AmiYuy Nikon Coolpix 8700 |
06/23/2004 06:16:56 PM |
This goes in order of what I notice first:
1) The title is confusing, but it's not affecting the score for this photo because I understand it enough.
2) The lighting is kind of blah, the sky is overexposed and bright, but the building (especially next to this gray website background) is uninteresting.
3) The repetition is nice for a different challenge, but for a newspaper it would have been cropped to only one or two rooms to get the point across, because that's all that is needed.
4) On the otherhand I like the overall composition, perhaps a more central position between the two to make the angles more even, it just feels kind of off...
Score: 5 |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
drgsoell Olympus C-750UZ |
06/23/2004 05:03:23 PM |
| Good subject. May have been better with light at a different time of day. Title is not a very descriptive or interesting headline. |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
Philos Canon EOS-30D |
06/23/2004 03:45:10 PM |
This scores high with me, because now I want to read the article...
WHAT HAPPENED? 9 |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
melismatica Minolta DiMAGE F200 |
06/23/2004 01:35:26 PM |
| Your headline doesn't jibe with the photo which indicates quite a bit of destruction. It is a bit obscure for photojournalism which requires clarity and immediacy for impact. This looks a bit soft focus to me. It is an interesting subject but needs a better headline. I feel kind of neutral about the composition. It records the destruction of this building but not in a way that draws me in for very long. |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
djscarrd Canon EOS-20D |
06/23/2004 07:42:24 AM |
| Wow, this pic would be something I would see in a newspaper. Whites aren't washed out. Good composition. |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
paha_l Nikon Coolpix 8800 |
06/23/2004 06:05:50 AM |
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jadin Nikon D1X |
06/23/2004 03:51:27 AM |
| Good photo (would be nice to see the rubble at the bottom) Good headline, makes me want to read the article. Good job on this challenge. |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
graphicfunk Canon EOS-20D |
06/23/2004 12:58:24 AM |
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intarso |
06/23/2004 12:28:55 AM |
| very cool building, great angle! |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
menardmam Canon EOS-30D |
06/23/2004 12:27:24 AM |
| WOW, and shit for people that live here.... they have a balcony now ! |
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