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08/13/2010 09:53:58 AM |
really like the ominous feel of the clouds |
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12/04/2009 06:44:49 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
My thoughts on the image: I absolutely love the drama you captured in the sky, as well as the balance created with the reflection in the water. While not a common presentation in landscape images, the power lines you included serve well as a line that leads me deep into the image. I agree with Jeff in that I like the left to right transition of color to monochrome. Additionally, I like the dichotomy you created with the nice green grass, a peaceful pond that is led into a busy city by a row of menacing power lines. This entry speaks a lot if one takes time to listen.
My ideas for improvement: I would have probably not have included the city in a landscape challenge, but that is strictly personal opinion. Had I voted, that may have prevented me from scoring this one well.
Where I would have/did score this entry: As I eluded to up above, I did not vote in this particular challenge. I am actually torn as to how I would have voted. If I were taking the time to study and comment on much of the challenge, this one would have pulled an 8 or 9 from me because of all it contains. Had I been storming through, handing out votes like many of us so often do, I would have most likely written it off as more of a cityscape and low balled it with a 4. Either way, I am glad I got the opportunity to critique the image and really have a chance to listen to all that is said within.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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11/29/2009 07:21:35 PM |
I love the contrast in this photo. |
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11/29/2009 11:33:37 AM |
Nice composition with a dramatic cloudy sky. I like the way the power lines lead the eyes towards the city in the distance. 10 |
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11/27/2009 11:12:14 PM |
even though you have a strong presence with the power lines in this I think that they add to the interest of the picture |
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11/27/2009 06:10:59 AM |
really nice shot with great lead lines from those power cables. Just a little over processed. 8 |
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11/27/2009 12:24:39 AM |
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11/26/2009 08:06:49 PM |
Great sky . The wires help to take the viewer through the shot. Nice work here |
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11/24/2009 10:59:40 PM |
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11/24/2009 10:03:21 PM |
Interesting how the photo transitions from a deep green color on the left to monochrome on the right. |
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