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Dawn on the 4th
Dawn on the 4th
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Landscape V (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Location: Flinders Golf Course
Date: Nov 20, 2009
Aperture: F8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/5, to 0.8 sec
Galleries: Landscape, High Dynamic Range (HDR)
Date Uploaded: Nov 20, 2009

 my first go at HDR
pity there was a little gust of wind and the flag moved
oh well not much i could do about that

combining 5 images using Photomatix Pro 3.2
then tonemapping
save as Tiff

in CS3
levels
reduce noise
resize
add borders
save to jpeg

fingers crossed for a PB at least but i can never tell

Statistics
Place: 96 out of 136
Avg (all users): 5.4419
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
Avg (participants): 5.3390
Avg (non-participants): 5.4956
Views since voting: 641
Views during voting: 346
Votes: 172
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 12/04/2009 06:10:05 AM
Hey there from the Critique Club

My thoughts on the image: I am not a fan of the post-processing here. It looks like the images you used for the sky were not aligned fully, leaving a repetitive, blurry feeling to the overall image.Even with that, I do like the strength in the colors and the approaching storm you captured.

My ideas for improvement: I'd like to see the golf course area a bit more exposed and brighter. While I am not 100% sure that the overlay is off up top, I think it was. If so, it needs to be properly aligned. If am am mistaken, please accept my apology.

Where I would have/did score this entry: I did not vote on this particular challenge, but this entry would have pulled a 3 or a 4 from me. The relative darkness of the landscape itself leaves room for vast improvements.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/29/2009 04:00:26 PM
ooooo that's pretty!!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/29/2009 11:33:04 AM
Surrealistic looking golf course scene because of the colors. Very nice composition. 10
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 11/27/2009 10:40:19 AM
Wish i was there!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/26/2009 07:11:05 PM
Great sky nice use of the thirds
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 11/24/2009 08:08:12 PM
Nice rich blues and greens. The flag movement is a bit distracting.
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 11/24/2009 11:30:52 AM
really like your colors
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