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Challenge: Into or Out Of the Frame (Basic Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-40D
Lens: Canon EF 200mm f/2.8 L II USM Lens
Location: Frelinghuysen, NJ
Date: Oct 13, 2009
Aperture: 11
ISO: 200
Shutter: 50
Galleries: Blur, Birds
Date Uploaded: Oct 13, 2009

sparrows nesting in piled bales of hay. big crop. curves and hue/sat.

I'm very happy with this picture. It's very me. I hope I get a sexy curve with this one.

Statistics
Place: 112 out of 113
Avg (all users): 3.9265
Avg (commenters): 4.0000
Avg (participants): 3.7447
Avg (non-participants): 3.9809
Views since voting: 833
Views during voting: 307
Votes: 204
Comments: 9
Favorites: 2 (view)


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10/27/2009 05:11:21 AM
Hey there from the Critique Club

Well, you just missed the sexy curve, and thankfully missed the brown as well. You ended up with a fat woman that has large breasts and very small ankles an feet. The image definitely has tension and interest, but the softness and business is somewhat difficult for my eye to linger on. I will say that the flow of the subject matter itself definitely keeps my eye wandering the frame. I always look forward to your entries. While not always 'DPC Friendly' they are never lacking thought and creativity.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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10/21/2009 07:49:02 AM
It's eerie how I'm getting more and more in tune with you :-) I was one of your top-9 votes, LOL. You knew it was doomed, of course, but gawd whatta lovely shot...
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10/21/2009 12:46:50 AM
Been a long time since I've seen something this good score this low.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/20/2009 05:10:31 PM
The camera shake really destroyed my 1st opinion of your shot. Perhaps emphasised by a severe crop? Had the nest been in focus, then the OOF bird would have drawn my attention more and it would have scored higher.
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10/16/2009 02:28:17 PM
just a little too blurry of a subject 6
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10/16/2009 12:09:06 AM
i like motion blur but there's a bit much here, a little hard to understand the shot. i see the bird and i think it flying by fit the challenge well though.
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10/15/2009 08:39:04 PM
good
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10/14/2009 06:39:28 PM
Not sure what this picture is of, maybe a bird in front of a bail of hay, it's too blurry to tell.
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10/14/2009 03:12:55 PM
i find this image far too OOF - i wish that the bird was much clearer.
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