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Going over the game...
Going over the game...
kevrobertson


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Deep DOF (Advanced Editing II)
Camera: Minolta DiMAGE E223
Location: Paisley
Date: Jun 6, 2004
Aperture: f6.9
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/280
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Jun 6, 2004

My sons after a kick about in the park

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Place: 78 out of 158
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06/12/2004 08:18:22 AM
Great concept. You will want to make the horizon level.
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06/08/2004 10:11:12 AM
Nice positioning of your models - composition is very pleaseing. The few wildflowers add a great feel. The over saturated colors really work well for this image. I like the slim Jim format - it may even be better with a little of the sky cropped off.
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06/08/2004 06:12:48 AM
A middle ground image, I would think: the areas of over-exposure in the sky, the messy skyline, and the right-hand kid's arm over his face will all get marked down I would think. For me, somehow the dof doesn't actual add to the shot - it isn't a fundamental part of the composition: imagine, if the background were out of focus, would it make a great difference to the composition? Not to my mind (the goalposts aren't a significant enough element - the football tells us what's been going on). It has an unprocessed look, and I think it cries out for more work - to lighten the faces, darken the clouds, add some depth and impact to the figures. Also, for me, the colour detracts from the image, taking the eye where it might be better to concentrate on shapes rather than colours
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06/07/2004 12:23:19 AM
great composition.
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