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09/06/2009 10:17:36 AM |
Hi from the Critique Club,
You asked for your shot to have an in depth comment from a member of the Critique Club.
I can see what you where going for here. You read the description of the challenge and you used the light to create a scene.
I think what is needed here is possible a focus, some sharpening, some focus, a tripod, more lighting, a faster shutter speed.
It is a good idea that you had though, maybe glueing the coins to some string and making them appear to fall into your hand out of a cup might help with the focus issue.
Some light underneath the hand may have helped a little also with the focus. Laying your hand on a table would have steadied your hand and not given you hand shake. The top of your hand is slightly cut off as well with the cup(?) move back just a tad to incorporate the cup and fingers.
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09/01/2009 08:40:36 PM |
| i not understand what this happening. |
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08/30/2009 09:45:43 PM |
| DNMC - Not the least bit compelling. Please review challenge description. |
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