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Rusty Railways Ltd
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Challenge: Rusted (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Sony DSC-F828
Location: Narita / Japan
Date: May 4, 2004
Date Uploaded: May 4, 2004

no effects or editing / cropping has been done to this pic it is just as it was taken. I had to resize it though to comply with the file size rules...

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Place: 174 out of 443
Avg (all users): 5.2754
Avg (commenters): 5.6667
Avg (participants): 5.0745
Avg (non-participants): 5.5565
Views since voting: 1049
Votes: 276
Comments: 15
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05/11/2004 10:05:26 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 7
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 6
How well does it meet the challenge: 9
Total Averaged Rating 7.00 Dick
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05/11/2004 09:58:21 AM
I love the divering tracks, and the centered tree in the background. Very well composed.
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05/09/2004 10:45:01 AM
Interesting perspective. Somewhat Hopper-like. Quirky in a nice way.
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05/08/2004 07:36:44 PM
Very nice shot. Unfortunately, a lot of distracting elements. I would like it much better with cropping on left and right exactly where rails disappear from view.

A 5.
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05/08/2004 08:56:00 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background 6
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing 5
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc. 5
How well does it meet the challenge: 7
Total Averaged Rating(Rounded) 6
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05/06/2004 03:54:21 PM
i would like this a lot more if it was a little more simple, like not as much grass in the ties, the stuff on the right, and the little poles. but i like it :-)
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05/06/2004 01:58:29 PM
I like your concept on this one, but you do have quite a bit of extra information here. Because the center of interest is the rustiness of the rails, it would have been fun to see a more concentrated look at them leaving out the flowers, trees & machinery. Nevertheless, this is a good take on the Challenge. Good luck!
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05/06/2004 12:54:27 PM
nice angle, great shot! i really like the trees in the middle. -10
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05/06/2004 03:40:20 AM
nice use of DOF ..9
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05/05/2004 11:30:34 PM
A nice choice of perspective - lead-in lines from both sides of the bottom. Exposure looks to be right on. The white sky draws attention away from your subject.
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05/05/2004 10:47:23 PM
nice lines. interesting shot. The little trees at the end ad some, but the tower to the right is a little bit distracting, along with a lot of negative space with the sky. I was looking at this while scrolling down, and if you stop (the upper edge) just at the edge where the tracks are curving out to the sides(right at the bottom of the tree) to me, this would make a great composition, especially in this topic.
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05/05/2004 05:54:44 PM
I think it would have been a better shot had you got in closer on the tracks and perhaps further back so the background isn't as visible as it is. The post on the right is distracting as are the small trees.
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05/05/2004 05:50:18 PM
Colors seems a bit flat, cloudy day I see, I think mabey cropping out the right part could have been better, Good luck :)
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05/05/2004 03:42:15 PM
nice shot, slight soft focus. I might have tried this shot vertical by losing the objects on the left and right.
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05/05/2004 12:10:42 AM
seems a little dull.
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