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09/17/2008 06:10:21 AM |
Hi Jaime,
Lovely shot. Good composition and framing. I can't fault this shot very much. It's well setup and executed.
If there's only one thing I'll point out, it'll be to give it a little more "action"!
A little sweat on the model would be a good start.
Her right hand seemed to be holding (and not punching) the punching bag. Keep that away.
On the whole, it's an excellent shot!.
Cheers
eric |
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09/15/2008 02:02:31 AM |
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09/15/2008 01:08:20 AM |
| Way HOT!!! man, congrats on top10 |
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09/15/2008 12:14:34 AM |
| brilliant shot and process jaime .. great score in a tough challenge .. :) |
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09/12/2008 09:31:42 PM |
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09/12/2008 08:03:37 PM |
| Oh your talking about that red thing. Doh...just kidding! What a perfect photo and certainly a ribbon contender if not top 10. 10 from me. |
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09/12/2008 04:52:37 PM |
| Lighting, perspective and color are great. Hand touching the bag is a little distracting. One of my top choices. |
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09/11/2008 06:09:46 PM |
| excellent...love her determined expression and the lighting 8 |
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09/11/2008 05:57:02 PM |
| Good job, the product name is in your face, very good composition. |
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09/10/2008 09:51:26 PM |
| dude she looks scary. that punching bag should be terrified |
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09/10/2008 05:54:22 PM |
| Nice lighting on the punching bag logo! |
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09/09/2008 06:46:20 PM |
| Great emphasis on the boxing back. Its colour is vivid, the logo is prominent, and the girl's eyes and punch are both focused on it. Really a great product shot. |
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09/09/2008 05:05:55 PM |
Fit Challenge Criteria: 2/2
Contrast/Color: 2/2
Composition: 2/2
Photo Quality: 2/2
My Subjective Affinity: 2/2
Excellent work here. |
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09/09/2008 09:58:51 AM |
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09/09/2008 02:13:25 AM |
| Great job to get the dof required for the Everlast and the model to be in focus. However the crop of the model's elbow, the fact that it is not a realistic punch pose, and the distracting white lines int he bg detract. |
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09/09/2008 01:38:16 AM |
| I would have been better if she had used the appropiate equipment. |
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09/08/2008 07:42:26 AM |
| This image is perfect for an advertisement, very well done. I don't think it would work for a catalog though, as the product is not depicted in its entirety. |
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09/08/2008 01:03:08 AM |
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09/08/2008 12:48:35 AM |
| I wish the Ever;ast was more in focus than the girl. good shot though. |
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