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Morning Service
Morning Service
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Your Occupation III (Advanced Editing VII)
Camera: Nikon D200
Lens: Tokina AF 12-24mm f/4.0 AT-X Pro DX
Location: Monterey Hotel Kyoto
Date: Aug 10, 2008
Aperture: f4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/80 second
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Aug 10, 2008

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- Tonal Contrast on tables and stained glass
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About the shot: I do wedding services in Japan at a nice hotel in Kyoto. I don't actual preach and I am not ordained. I have more questions than I do answers, and while the services themselves are more for the snapshots, it's a great privilege to play such an important part of someones wedding. The chapel is also a place where I can feel at peace since nobody is inside unless there's a wedding.

Statistics
Place: 45 out of 98
Avg (all users): 5.9733
Avg (commenters): 6.5556
Avg (participants): 5.8163
Avg (non-participants): 6.0290
Views since voting: 832
Views during voting: 335
Votes: 187
Comments: 10
Favorites: 1 (view)


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08/21/2008 10:06:38 PM
Critique Club Review:

Color, Saturation, and Hue: Colors are good, Saturation is appropriate for this subject, and Hues are realistic.

Brightness and contrast: Image could be a little brighter, the area above and around the window is a little dark for me, which brings the image down a bit. If the brightness were adjusted, likely contrast would have to be also, to keep the highlights from burning out.

Focus and depth of field: Overall focus appears to be a tiny bit soft. Nothing really bad, but I would think it would be a little sharper with this camera/lens combo. Depth of field is excellent.

The image appears to lean a bit to the left. The vertical architectural detail on the left border of the image, and the surface of the altar, and the stained glass windows themselves, all appear to slope a bit downwards to the left. The other thing that may have hurt you a bit is that this image involves the dreaded R word. (Religion) If an image has much to do with western religions, some will vote them lower. (Intersting that this was taken in Japan. Had this been an image in a Buddhist temple, you might have gotten a little higher score. Others are offended by any religion.)

I like the saturation on the statined glass. The is just a bit of washout at the top of the right hand window. I also like the way you have captured the light on the floor.

Nice job of posing the subject. The light on his face works really well. Shows this is a thoughtful piece, not a simple snapshot. Though, as I look I think you may have tried for too much in one image. To fit whole window and all of him in, and both in focus, there is so much there that neither is dominant, neither is large enough to get all the interesting detail in there.

Overall, I like the richness of the color throughout. Nice work.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
08/15/2008 12:15:01 PM
the streaming light, the illuminated face, the look up - it works very well together
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08/13/2008 04:47:53 PM
I really like the idea presented here but I think other points of view should have been explored - there are many possibilities for a real POP photo
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08/13/2008 11:35:10 AM
Very good job on the light and the composition is good as well.
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08/12/2008 09:40:38 PM
peaceful, lovely light, very reflective. I'm an atheist but I'm making this a fave. 9
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08/12/2008 12:55:02 AM
I really like this .. nice work!
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08/11/2008 08:59:46 PM
This seems a little too staged for my taste. While I really like the idea of the shot, I wonder if you might have gotten a better composition by just lowering the camera angle and tightening up on an over the shoulder view to emphasize the stained glass.

Your lighting is beautiful, and hard to match anywhere else.
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08/11/2008 07:01:26 PM
Great light and colors and a nice mood conveyed.
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08/11/2008 07:53:30 AM
WOW what stunning light. I adore stained glass. Lovely reverent image. :~)
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08/11/2008 12:57:27 AM
amen. Nice windows too.
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