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Mommy's New Bracelet
Mommy's New Bracelet
timfythetoo


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Challenge: Something New IV (Basic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-30D
Lens: Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon
Date: Oct 30, 2007
Date Uploaded: Oct 30, 2007

 This, of course, is my daughter Rowan. Many of you actually know her (and her brother) by name now. She is starting to become a wonderful little poser just like her brother. Though her attention span is much shorter.

We got our new Tamron 28-75 lens on the Tuesday this challenge was going up (it's Wednesday right now as I write this). I had not planned on entering anything as there was little to no inspiration. I was farting around with the lens and our new flash set up (580exII master and 420ex slave on light stand with umbrella) and I started thinking that maybe a shot of Rowan with something might fly for New. I was thinking necklace or some sort of jewlery. I was searching through Aimee's jewelry box and came across this bracelet she had gotten while on her mission trip to Thailand this past July. I know Rowan loves it. I set up our velvet backdrop, put the bracelet on her wrist and posed her arms so that the bracelet would not only be in view but that it would stay in a steady position and look somewhat natural. I popped off a handful of shots - what I could in the few minutes she allowed me - and went to edit.

This shot of all of them struck me the strongest. The look on her face just had a strong feel to it. Not so much innocent, but strong. It wasn't until well into editing that the thought of her having no shirt on could be an issue. I mean, she runs around shirtless at home all of the time. It meant nothing to me when I shot it. But the thought did cross my mind. So I reshot with a shirt on. The pics were cute, but none had the power this one did. So I finished editing and waited for Aimee to come home.

Aimee saw it, suggested b&w (it was in color when I showed her) and then said she wanted a print of it. I told her my concern and she didn't see it. So in it went.

I have gotten a couple of comments in regards to the pose. She does look much older than her years (which was 2 at the time of the shoot - she turns 3 on Nov 5th) but that wasn't what I set out for. I am not the dad who wants to see my daughter in beauty pageants at the age of 5 that has had glamour shot style makeovers and all that crazy stuff. I wanted to capture a picture of my beautiful daughter in a classy way. I think I did that.

At the time of me writing this my score has moved up strong. I was at 6.1 earlier in the day and now I am here -
Votes: 75
Views: 130
Avg Vote: 6.5600
Comments: 9

Probably not ribbon worthy but maybe another top 10.

Editing steps - RAW conversion in DPP, levels, selective color and hue/sat adjustments (multiple times especially to tweak the blue and cyan channels to bring out the details in her eyes), more hue/sat adjustment layers to convert to b&w, crop, NI, resize, USM, border and then another round of levels to make the shadows even darker. I so wanted this to be advanced editing. I woudl have gone a little crazy with this one.

Statistics
Place: 9 out of 90
Avg (all users): 6.3555
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 6.4375
Avg (non-participants): 6.3408
Views since voting: 2288
Views during voting: 308
Votes: 211
Comments: 22
Favorites: 3 (view)

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AuthorThread
 12/12/2007 10:23:28 AM
Looking through your portfolio and I found this lovely shot of your beautiful little daughter, with the strong look in the set of her jaw. The title was perfect, just a little girl trying on something shiny and special. This should be framed large in the family room, as one of those extremely fleeting moments. Really a great pose. B&W makes it.
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 11/11/2007 01:28:45 PM
and Top 10 it is!!

how sweet for our kids to have all of these images of themselves!!
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 11/11/2007 09:34:36 AM
I didn't vote on this challenge, but when looking at the results I think this is a beautiful photo, you captured part of her growing personality. I never noticed she had no shirt on until I read your comment.
Our new world has its advantages and disadvantages and reading some of the comments makes me wonder where is innocence gone?
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 11/07/2007 08:30:47 AM
awesome!
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 11/07/2007 08:29:33 AM
I swear, she is sooooo photogenic. Congrats on top 10
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 11/07/2007 05:50:33 AM
Tim, your kids should be getting paid! Nice to see this in the top 10
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 11/07/2007 12:23:17 AM
Great finish for a deserving photo. I, too, like her expression here.
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 11/07/2007 12:21:16 AM
I can't belive this shot didn't ribbon, what a shame really.
It's fantastic on every level. Love it.
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 11/07/2007 12:15:13 AM
Congrats Timmy....wahoo!!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/06/2007 02:03:38 AM
I really like the lighting in this one. Her pose is also very well done. Good job
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 11/02/2007 01:06:42 PM
Great lighting, composition, focus and nice and simple
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 11/02/2007 01:46:08 AM
Good lighting, cute girl with innocent expression :)
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 11/01/2007 01:08:54 PM
great portrait. good lighting with the right balance of bright and dark.
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 11/01/2007 09:10:42 AM
On one hand, I like your image - the composition, lighting - all very good. On the other hand, my first thought when I saw this was...well...child pornography (sorry - just my intial thought). Perhaps too much on the news lately or the way the child has her arms crossed to "coverup"
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 10/31/2007 10:23:02 PM
charming..........
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 10/31/2007 10:18:03 PM
good photo, for me it looks like one of those posters against child abuse
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 10/31/2007 06:23:26 PM
excellent lighting and beautiful bw conversion. 8
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 10/31/2007 03:05:50 PM
This has to be Rowan. Well done, Tim (or Aimee I guess, but it looks like a Tim)! Beautiful portrait, and the B/W serves it well.
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 10/31/2007 03:02:12 PM
Wow, is all I can say. Definitely a contender in this challenge!
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 10/31/2007 10:50:28 AM
Why so solemn? The look and the pose seem too mature for a child playing dressup ... makes this a little uncomfortable for me. Lighting is quite dramatic. Might like a little more negative space above the model to balance the space on the right.
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 10/31/2007 08:22:21 AM
Interesting pose for a 3-4 year old.....making her old before her time!
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 10/31/2007 02:42:10 AM
Very nice tones! Great portrait!
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