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09/11/2007 11:39:10 PM |
Technicals: you control the lighting well. We have some details in the rock and the bright isn't blown. I think the composition may need some tweaking (see below). Focus is on.
The feel: I want to crop this tighter. I like the natural frame the rock provides, but I do not like the large expanse of rock on the left. I think you would do better with about half of it. A closer crop will also provide more real estate for your model who is somewhat small in this shot.
The game: I think you had a good idea here. Meets the challenge well and is creative with a bit of "wow". Some work on the perspective and cropping might have gotten this one closer to 6. |
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08/27/2007 11:54:32 PM |
WOW!!!, i love the compostion here, you deserve a 9 for this one |
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08/26/2007 10:15:32 PM |
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08/24/2007 06:26:56 AM |
I think the dark areas are a bit too dark for my taste, think this shot would have benefited from a little shadow/highlight treatement but it´s a pretty good shot, at least above average in this challenge. |
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08/22/2007 12:25:07 PM |
Nice image - Nice and crisp and I like the composition |
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08/22/2007 12:10:10 AM |
I just love reflections...very nice |
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