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09/09/2002 04:13:00 PM |
Thank you to everybody who commented. You were all very generous! This was my first entry and I tried twice to de-enter this but I'm glad I kept it in because your suggestions and critiques are invaluable. You asked the questions:
Can she cook? No
Can I get her number? No
Alansfreed: Yep! LOL
Looking good is hard -- sometimes impossible -- hope we never have a "self portrait" challenge.
Her father painted the big flower on the wall, thank you.
The blouse isn't fuzzy. Must be my shakey hand.
Thank you again to everybody. I think with some PS trickery I can add this to my album.
Jo Ann
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09/06/2002 06:16:00 AM |
| Nice painted background. Perhaps you could have moved a little left while taking the picture, and zoomed a little bit on the top ( to avoid the yellow on the top and the right). |
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09/04/2002 06:46:00 PM |
| Good photo. Parts of me like the hair in front of the face (adds some mystery), while the rest of me says show the face. Is the blouse made of a fuzzy materiel? Most of the photo looks fairly crisp, except for the blouse. 8 Swash |
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09/03/2002 10:14:00 PM |
| Nice shot! Good lighting on her and her reflection without catching any flash glare. |
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09/03/2002 08:03:00 PM |
| I would like to see more of the face, and less background |
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09/03/2002 07:34:00 PM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background4,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing4,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating4. Autool
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09/02/2002 11:49:00 PM |
| Girls and their hair stuff. I think I have that Good Shepherd picture somewhere around my house too. Did she paint that picture of the big flower. It's pretty good. |
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09/02/2002 11:25:00 PM |
mood captured - they always get it to look so good on TV, it can't be that hard, can it?
sincerity of expressions - good |
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09/02/2002 09:24:00 PM |
| I like the concept, and she does look like someone who doesn't need to do much to herself to look good :) I think there are a few too many distractions, though, like the image taped to the mirror (I'll probably go to hell for suggesting that it not be included...). Great concept, though. |
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09/02/2002 05:57:00 PM |
| I like the reflection, and the colors. Decent composition, etc. The only thing I can suggest is that it'd be better if she was having a different expression or turn slightly to the right so her face can be seen in the reflection. I like it -- it keeps me wanting to look at the mirror. Oh yeah, one more thing: Can I get her number? :-) Just kidding. 7.5 = "8" paganini |
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09/02/2002 01:53:00 AM |
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