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08/19/2008 12:31:44 AM |
| i really like the crop on this one, as well as the colors, the flame is a tad bit blown out but all in all a very nice shot |
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09/01/2002 11:55:00 PM |
| Make a wish and blow out the candle. Beautiful colors. I love the framing and the angle is great. very yummy looking photo. love how you captured the flame. great shot and good luck in the challenge. |
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09/01/2002 08:29:00 PM |
| Mmm..ice cream sandwich. Good shot. 6. |
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08/31/2002 03:17:00 PM |
| I like the idea and the colors but I think the composition is not very good. The mate reduce too much the impact of the cookie and the candle. 5 |
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08/31/2002 06:22:00 AM |
| Love the colours. The shot is filled out really well. |
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08/30/2002 10:46:00 PM |
| Good composition, color, and exposure. |
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08/30/2002 11:24:00 AM |
| nice composition and very colorful. (6) ~mcmurma |
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08/30/2002 05:17:00 AM |
Nice close crop, wonderful colours. Is the knot in the pine table which is positioned at the top right corner intentionally included?
6, Kavey |
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08/29/2002 10:22:00 AM |
| This is a great shot. Composition is first class – and mouth watering… Lighting works, and the candle is a nice touch… The only flaw – and it's tiny – relates to the reflected glare in the plate. Bounced flash might have gotten rid of that. Good luck (8) |
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08/29/2002 09:17:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background8,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing9,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 7,
Total Averaged Rating8. Autool
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08/28/2002 11:10:00 AM |
| great shot..compositon..use of colors..and I like the way the flame is blowing |
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08/27/2002 05:44:00 AM |
| I didn't think I would like a cake / birthday shot but I was wrong. I like this photo. I would prefer none of the table visible, as well as the glare / reflection off the plate at the bottom. What if you tried this in the dark, allowing the candle flame to illuminate the plate? Have you tried it before? Good job. |
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08/27/2002 05:14:00 AM |
| Good lighting and DOF. The only thing that I don't like about the composition is the table at the upper and lower right hand corners. I find that to be just a little distracting. lhall |
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08/26/2002 09:07:00 PM |
| I understand why you used the fancy plate, but I find it makes the picture a bit cluttered. |
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08/26/2002 06:11:00 PM |
| Nice vibrant colours. Nice candleshot, just in the picture frame. Making it a good picture! |
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08/26/2002 03:10:00 PM |
| Yum. I like the bright colors on this. my only suggestion would be to move the cookie down a little so that the candle doesn't touch the top edge. karmat |
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08/26/2002 12:04:00 PM |
| A nice colorful photo... it would appeal to me as depicting childhood even without the candle, although it wouldn't have fit the name. And... don't use the name of the challenge in the title, no way, no part, no how! |
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08/26/2002 08:46:00 AM |
| Simple, good honest, bright childhood. I like the bright colors and smiley face, and the tilted candle flame keeps the eye moving in a circle, which emphasizes the ice cream bar. |
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08/26/2002 01:18:00 AM |
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