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09/01/2002 07:51:00 PM |
| I wish the faucet wasn't cropped in half. 6. |
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09/01/2002 09:33:00 AM |
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background6,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Challenge: Does your entry meet it?6,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 5,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
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08/31/2002 11:46:00 PM |
| Great idea! I love the angle and the set up is really nice. Lighting is perfect and so is the focus. Definately depicts childhood. Great shot and good luck in the challenge. |
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08/29/2002 10:41:00 AM |
| Maybe more effective if shot from below somehow. This gives me the feeling of being an adult looking down at a kid's world...maybe making me feel like a kid would elicit more emotion? |
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08/29/2002 12:21:00 AM |
| Without the title, this is a stretch. Not enough contrast in the items around the sink. 3 Jak |
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08/27/2002 07:26:00 PM |
ok composition but title could be a lot better. A title like "bedtime" might be better.
The angle at which it was taken feels a little forced. |
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08/27/2002 02:38:00 PM |
| A child's eye view (from a lower angle) might have been more effective here. |
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08/27/2002 12:28:00 PM |
| This is a classic. It has everything the challenge demands – but it also has that little something that sets it apart. It's one of those pictures that tells a story and makes you smile – even Teddy gets discarded when play time is being wasted :) I really love the composition and lighting and I could find faults perhaps, but I'd rather just enjoy the shot as you intended. (10) |
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08/26/2002 07:21:00 PM |
| I can't believe I used to we the tooth brush and say I had brushed my teeth. Or maybe I can with all the work that I have had on my teeth... |
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08/26/2002 05:57:00 PM |
| Original picture, not toys but a refreshing picture. Like the detail of the teddybear on the floor! |
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08/26/2002 02:32:00 PM |
The idea grabs me more than the photo - I have memories of my sister and I going through a phase of only pretending to brush our teeth - we'd wet the toothbrushes and smear paste in our mouths... lord knows why we didn't just brush them - it would have been less bother! Luckily my teeth survived that little phase and are still in good state!
On a visual level this photo isn't grabbing me. Firstly I think the fact that the top of the marble unit and the tap need to be included. Secondly I am wondering if this would be more interesting taken from down low, the child's perspective. I like the teddy disgarded on the floor.
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08/26/2002 01:11:00 PM |
| maybe from a child's view |
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08/26/2002 03:38:00 AM |
| This picture would probably have been more effective if taken from a lower, kid-height perspective. |
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08/26/2002 02:45:00 AM |
| this photo certainly made me smile, it definately tells a story |
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08/26/2002 12:47:00 AM |
| A different angle (child's height) would really have helped you here. |
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