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01/22/2007 10:50:02 AM |
Hmmm – thought you got a bit of a pasting here for daring to do something a little different – the noise and deliberate blur work well for me… however I think a more dynamic shooting position would improve the composition, this is a little too ‘in profile’ to really emphasise the idea of action, and a brighter colour in there somewhere, say a bright red top for the lady, too give it a little (metaphorical) punch!
Don’t be afraid to submit works that are a little ‘outside the box’ for DPC though – work on your style – originality is rarely fully appreciated in its infancy. |
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01/21/2007 10:15:17 PM |
| a little blurry and noisy |
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01/21/2007 06:40:53 PM |
| Sorry, you need at least the basics to get a good score from me. I can't even suggest anything except, try again. |
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01/21/2007 12:37:26 AM |
| I really don't care for the blur and noise. |
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01/18/2007 09:19:08 PM |
| Great idea, but the image quality isn't working in my opinion. |
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01/18/2007 10:37:57 AM |
| Unclear by blur and unclear as to what is the intended depiction. No saving graces. 2 |
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01/18/2007 08:42:29 AM |
| I hate it. Thats all I will say. Im sorry. Im sure your other work is good, I just don't particulary like this one. |
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01/17/2007 06:22:43 PM |
| oof and grainy. Low quality image. |
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01/17/2007 05:37:26 PM |
| Sorry, but this is a really terrible image. Blurred and noisy, I'm not sure that you really intended all of it, and I'm sure it could have been better with the same ideas. The misspelled word on the title doesn't help it for me either. |
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01/17/2007 12:18:53 PM |
| Interesting idea, but I think the result is only semi-successful. It looks more like the photographer was jumping up and down than the two people were fighting. |
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01/16/2007 04:58:30 PM |
| love the movement it really makes the picture 10 |
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01/15/2007 09:42:51 AM |
Fits challenge, however, lots of noise caused by flat lighting or underexposure. The motion blur leaves almost nothing in focus, leading to an image that appears happenstance.
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01/15/2007 03:06:49 AM |
Meets Challenge: 1/1
Lighting: 0/2
Focus: 0/2
Creativity: 1/2
Aesthetics: 0/3 |
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01/15/2007 01:53:25 AM |
| Oof, grainy, and not very creative sorry. |
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01/15/2007 12:32:42 AM |
| Very blurry and grainy. Nice idea though. |
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01/15/2007 12:23:56 AM |
Where to start? First, while I'm sure the blur is intentional, it does nothing for me. Whatever detail isn't removed by the motion blur is further obscured by the swath of chroma noise (all the blue stuff that is randomly distributed everywhere) that is this image's most dominant feature. Finally...demestic? You should look into installing the Firefox 2.0 web browser. Its built in spell checker will never leave you spelling dOmestic wrong again!
So, in summary, I'm giving you a 1. Feel free to PM me (even during voting, I don't really care) and I'll gladly give you some pointers to remedy these mistakes for next time! |
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