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Prelude to a Dream
Prelude to a Dream
Chaszmyr


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Dreams and Nightmares (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon EOS-D60
Location: Home
Date: Oct 5, 2003
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/60
Galleries: Floral
Date Uploaded: Oct 5, 2003

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Place: 103 out of 112
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Votes: 152
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10/17/2003 08:24:15 PM
Hi from the Critiqure Club

I don't know ... lighting a shot like this with a flash onyl is like mixing all your colours together and then throwing them at the canvas in an attempt to paint a landscape: you're just starting from the wrong place. Try this: arrange flowers as desired. Point anglepoise, or desk light, or anything, at said flowers, but absolutely not from the same direction as the camera, and preferably at ninety degrees to it. Fix camera to something solid; really solid. If you have no tripod, then use a bag, or a table, anything, but don't hold it in your hand whatever you do. Set your aperture and exposure; if you use the automatic settings (and why would you, with that camera of yours?), set the focus and exposure from a half release of the shutter (unless the camera is to professional for that, in which case tough). Shoot photograph. Done. A thousand times better than this.

And seriously, PLEASE try this, and think about it. It'll improve your scores no end, I promise, and alos improve your enjoyment of photography. Really. Corss-lighting is everything in still lifes.

Ed
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/12/2003 11:37:56 AM
The flash gave this some harsh light; you might want to just use natural light, even from the sun (but take it in the shade) and a tripod for a longer exposure. The composition is so nice here; I like how the flowers form a triangle that leads the eye around the image.
10/11/2003 12:52:30 AM
I would have liked this image more if the hue and saturation were a little higher. also a greater DOF so that all the roses were in focus. Try spraying with water and using a thin piece of white paper over the flash to difuse the light, the shawdow cast was just a bit to harsh. hope I helped 4
10/09/2003 11:11:01 PM
This really made me think how it related to a dream and then I thought, a dream date, a dream man, a dream evening? The overall shot is well done, good cropping and nice black background to help the roses stand out but I would have probably liked it just a bit better with a soft focus for this challenge ;)
10/08/2003 10:02:07 AM
IMOP, vertical would look better.
10/07/2003 01:57:13 PM
Nice neg space for the BG but the flash tends to flatten things out. Try no flash and lighting from the side to bring out texture and depth.


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