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07/30/2006 08:17:37 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Okay, first may I say I have no business "critiquing" anything you shoot, LOL but you asked for this :)
I like this shot very much, the concept, the composition, the overall feel of the shot. I would have bet that was water around the egg and not the egg white. How on earth did you get it so clear? Amazing and the clarity and color of the shot is wonderful.
If I were to get really nit picky I would have to say that one bubble or whatever it is about the yolk is a bit distracting and the white part right by the yolk is also a bit distracting. Looking at your score and the votes 5 and below would probably be the DNMC votes, but I think this meets it just fine and I'm not even a fan of abstract but I like the way the lines are blurred in the white of the egg and the solid lines around it. Very well done.
I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!
Deannda |
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07/24/2006 12:32:58 PM |
| Visually very interesting. |
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07/24/2006 12:31:07 PM |
| i think u deserved more than the 28th place. i like it! |
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07/22/2006 03:41:01 AM |
| pretty cool idea - I like how the checkerboard gets all distorted where the egg white is |
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07/19/2006 10:04:41 PM |
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07/18/2006 12:56:15 AM |
| This one is cool. I love the way the egg looks transparent but at the same time it looks like chrome. nice job setting this one up. |
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07/17/2006 10:38:41 PM |
| I just like it. Creative. |
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07/17/2006 02:42:34 PM |
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07/17/2006 11:41:32 AM |
| so cool the backround is confusing in good way |
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07/17/2006 01:53:36 AM |
| fantastci as an abstract, suits the challenge...well executed |
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